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 These days parents have/exert very so much Perssure on their children to succeed that which causes them a lot of trouble/many negatives and positives on them which I do not agree with them. In my view, there are some reasons that why parents Force children to be successful for instance ,they are concerned about the future of their children and think if they don’t succeed they will not live easily and make money as much as they want and enjoy their life.  I think it has some positive and negative points for children for example, children get who succeed may feel more satisfied in comparison with others in the future but they missed a lot of happiness and enjoyment which they should experience when they are youngchild which makes them effective persons in the future butand cann cannot learn how to enjoy their life. Besides, ,besides;it decreases children's creativeness which it also affects on their professional future to be successful. To conclude, putting more pressure on children to progress have has more negative effect on them which does not let children to enjoy their life, as well ;moreover ,it may not make them successful people.