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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. No one can ever deny a the significant role of parents in children’s future life. They can be extremely effective on various aspects during their children’s lives. I personally support this statement for a couple of reasons which I explain in this essay. For the most and main reasons which can be on the top and covers other reasons is " being independent " which means if parents encourage their children to have a part-time jobs they can understand the independent concepts which can be beneficial for them. Children have to done their jobs without getting aid from others or their parents and in place of taking money and if they have done well, they will take more money. For instance, when I was at highschool I had a summer job. I delivered foods by bike at green burger and my boss said "If any of you delivers the food to the customer sooner, I will give more money ". I had to ride a bike carefully and delivere the orders as soon as possible without anyone's help to get more money. Besides, when teenagers start working, they figure out the meaning of responsibility which means they have variable tasks that they have to do in the best possible way. This responsibility can help children to prepare for their future responsibilities such as marriage, having a pet or a baby. In the above example, delivering foods sound safely and on time food was my responsibility. Another remarkable points is that, by starting to work children can learn how to manage their time and their money. Although this teenager working might has have a side effects and If they manage their time, it cannot endanger affect their homework or lessons. On the other hand, teenagers can realize about money value and how tough it can it be to make money, so they attempt to save their budget and get make an informed decision to spend it. Ultimately, persuade persuading teenagers to take a part-time job will impact on diverse aspects of their life. It teaches them how important they can be independent, have more responsibility and how they should manage their time and money. They can comprehend the concept of money value also they can earn extremely worthy experiences.

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