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Shopping is the favorite pastime for most young people . why do you think is that ? Do you think they should be encourage to do some other useful activities ? Purchasing is a popular hobby for most of the teenagers , some people think we should encourage them to spent spend their time for on more beneficial stuff activities , in my opinion you can try to encourage them but it may not work for every one . I think that the young people spending their time for shopping is not too bad because when you are young you like to be good looking specially in among your peer group and you will live your youth just once so you want to do the things that you like , also shopping can be related to other activities that you may like , for instance when you are willing to do sport or you like parties you need clothes and sport stuff . thus shopping is not always a bad thing and it can be necessary for your beneficial activities. On the other hand, trying to encourage young people to spend their time for on more useful activities is a good idea like giving some new thoughts or plans to them about the activities that they might have no information about. showing the advantages of having a daily plan in their life and teaching them about long term plans for their life can be helpful to managing manage their time and they can have a better choice . As a result, being passionate about shopping is a part of youth and we need to live this period of our life too but like always we need the experiences , advisesadvice and guidance from people who they are older than us for less fewer mistakes and less regrets in future . The pie charts show the average household expenditures in a county in 1950 and 2010 . The pie charts illustrate the inhabitant expenses in a township in 1950 and 2010. Overall it can be seen that in 1950 the main part of the expenses was for housing and after that was food in the second place , but in 2010 food was the first and housing was the second .In 1950 housing with 72.1 percent was the main part of expenses and food with 11.2 percent was after housing . education , other and transportation with ( 6.6 percent , 4.4 percent and 3.3 percent ) respectively were after food , health with only 2.4 percent was the lowest one . in 2010 food with 34.0 percent was the highest and housing with 22.0 percent was after food , the next place with 19.2 percent was for other . the same as in 1950 the , health care also in 2010 was the lowest. transportation with 14.0 and education with 6.3 were after other .

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