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Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Nowadays, some people claim that women play a crucial role at in upbringing of children in comparison of to men throughout the world. However, the others believe both men and women have equal effect on raising children. In this essay I am going to ponder on both ideas as to whether women are better in parenting or men with moral judgement. It is true that in many countries mothers play an important role in raising children because they spend chunk of their times with their offspring, since a large number of them stay at home and do not work especially in third world countries. Furthermore, women naturally are sensitive and not aggressive easily so they can provide more calm and joy for their children, taking good care of them in their diverse period of time. Thus, women have essential effect on children’s future. On the contrary, men also play a crucial role in upbringing of children due to their financial responsibilities. They can provide whole necessities for their offspring as well as essential educating facilities. Apart from that, fathers’ behaviour has extremely much of an influence on children’s behaviour since they get involved with their fathers, seeing themhim as a role model for their future, hence the crucial role of fathers. In conclusion, not only does the existence of both women and men have major influence on kids’ life, but also if one of them does not exist due to divorceing or deathdie, children will have some problems in their future because of lack of mother or father. hence, both father and mother have a key role inon kids’ future.