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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children? Nowadays, learning teaching children is one of the most disputable discussions in the world, especially when it comes to talking about disparity diffrence between right and wrong at an early age. Some people believe that punishment can help for teaching and upbringing bring up children. The others, however, believe children are innocent and adults do not have to blame them due to their behaviours. I agree with the first group but not completely. Although, parents need to punish children sometimes, the type of punishments is really important. For instance, infants always do wrong behaviourmisbehave because they cannot recognize the difference between correct and incorrect, so they want to learn and experience. Moreover, parents have their own ways to nurture kids as well as teachers, but in my opinion the main point is how they react to their faults. In other words, according to some psychologists’ issues studies corporal punishment have has a terrible influence effect on children’s mind and causes some problems in society and their private life in the future. There are lots of diverse punishments suggested which not only they are not harmful but also they encourage children to have positive reaction and also help them to find out their wrong behaviour and change it. For example, adults should convince children with by buying a prize or sometimes saying no to them because children understand that they will not reach anything they want. In conclusion, keeping balance between agreement and disagreement from with children’s requests can lead them to think well and decide wisely. Furthermore, parents’ lifestyle and behaviour are the best example for children which they always pay attention themto, hence thereby building making their characters.

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