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Haniyeh Khaksar 6/12/2018 In many Countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion? We can discuss children working in several ways. There are some points in two sides of advantages and disadvantages. For instance, practical learning, poverty, education, enjoying childhood, etc Practical learning is the best positive point for children working. They can accomplish precious experience which it doesn’t exist in school education. I think it will be valuable when it doesn’t stop children from education. They need more impractical education to be an specialist. Another thing that maybe we can count as a positive point is contributing in to the family income when they are poor and need that little income. Additionally working helps children to be independent. On the other hand, The most important negative point in this issue is the that children can’t cannot spend their childhood as a child! They lose their happiness, soul, social plays with their friends and other things. Furthermore, they don’t are not educated as well as an expert person in their major. Besides, education is not only about a major, but rather it includes another items such as teamwork, social relationship, problem-solving problems skills, etc. They can learn these things without too much stress in a suitable environment.2 In my opinion, engaging children in a paid work is not acceptable but I think they can do some practical works as internship. It will be useful and enjoyable for them.

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