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Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by spending too much time on the compute4r computer every day. For instance, sitting in front of a screen for too long can threaten their health specially their eyes and their physical posture. However, the main concern is that, usually children especially juveniles use the computer for playing games that most of them are violenceviolent. In addition, the player is so impressed by the game that they get addicted to it. The too much exposure can encourage children to be anti-social and insensitive to others. Even, when children use the computer in a correct way such as getting some information or searching something for their schoolwork purposes, this fact that they are drowning in to the non-virtual world is undeniable, and this would have effected on their future social behavior. In spite of this, because of the development of the technology, children have to learn how to use the computer. Their adult world is dependent on the technology, and the computer and the internet are two important factors that everyone have has to have knowledge about them. At the end, I believe that spending too much time on the screen is harmful, but we cannot forbid our children to not to use the computer, because nowadays computers are one of the most significant gadgets in the world. Therefore, in my opinion parents should establish, impose, place, put, set make some limits for their children about this tool and control their time that is spending spent on the screen.

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