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Banafsheh Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. Why do you think is that? Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience. Shopping has always been a favorable amusement amongst the youth and has becomes a major part of their life. Despite the fact that spending time in stores can be quite interesting and refreshing, mistreatment excess and lack of control might cause young people to get carried away and make regretful regrettable decisions whilst spending money. I personally believe that younger generations should be encouraged to spend their precious time on other more beneficial activities. One of the reasons that the youth tend to become shopaholics is not having specific goals and perspective of how to spend their money. For example, one’s parents might give them one pocket money generously; as a result, they one may decide to purchase items even though they one might not need them. Moreover, some people only shop to keep up with the joneses. Therefore, it should be the experienced people’s duty to guide younger ones and advise them to pay more attention as to how to spend time and money on more beneficial hobbies such as sports and learning skills. Another fact that has exacerbated the tendency to shop is the growth of technology. For instance, with the advent of applications such as Instagram, nowadays people can shop more conveniently. Furthermore, such technologies attract youth’s attention easily and encourage them to get involved and spend money on what they advertise.In conclusion, not only is shopping one of the favorite pastimes but also it has becomes a habit between youngsters. All these things are the in consequence of misguidance and absence of accurate advertising related to young people. Then, both the government and parents should encourage them to do more applicable activities.

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