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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Many argue that children had better participate in predesigned activities in a team during their spare time, . others, however, reason that it is more beneficial if children learn how to manage their free time by on their own. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally, believe group activities inherently have more advantages than personal ones. Advocates of planned team works hold the idea that children can learn a lot if being involved in a group activity. They can find new friends, and improve their social skills in such groups. That certain group activities can significantly improveing social skills of children is an undeniable fact. Furthermore, in most cases team works isare designed in a way that benefits the society. Collecting garbage from nature, paying a visit to senior citizens and supporting other children with special needs are cases in point that specialists claim that not only do this activities benefit the society, but also improve children in a variety of aspects. On the other hand, people who are not agree with organized activities in a group, reason that not only do may those activities may damage part of children’s character, but also may endanger they their life if the organizers fail to take care of them carefully. If children learn how to spend their spare time in an appropriate way during their childhood, they can manage their time in their future life. Time management is plays a crucially important role in our life, and it is one of the skills people can development since from early ages. Only if children succeeded into occupying the time, can their parents expect them to stand on their own feet as an independently successful person. To sum up, though I do not prefer the group activities I cannot deny the merits of them. Although Happy and energetic now, children who take part in such organized activities may suffer from critical mismanagement in their adulthood. From my point of view, parents would rather let their children decide on their spare time by themselves.

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