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Topic: Some people think that children should go to kindergarten before attending primary school, while others believe that is better for children to stay all day with their families. Discuss both views and give your own opinion Although nowadays, going to the kindergarten has become more popular all over the world, there are some different prospects about this relatively modern change. Some are for attending nursery school while the opponents are against this. I, personally, believe that it has overwhelminged merits for children going to kindergarten if their parents chose the one which is suitable, otherwise it can have some dire consequences. On the one hand, some insist on the view that not going to nursery school is appealing owing to waves of reasons. Firstly, the experiences of children passing all the time with their families at home show that they become sick less compared to those who are going to kindergarten, and it is obviously conspicuous as viral diseases can be spread out easily in these types of circumstances. Moreover, since children’s immune system is more vulnerable, they are at higher risks of being sick. Furthermore, economy-wise providing costs of these day-care services may impose more pressure on families’ budget especially, in some countries where there is not any subsidy which is allocated to this segment by governments or any non-profit organization. Besides, there is the psychological theory expressing that going to kindergarten before primary school narrow restricts children’s freedom down which is merely available in early ages; that is to say, they have much time to learn expertise and being in society while it is a really scarce situation for humans having to have this absolute tranquility and joy. On the other hand, some advocate the opposing impression that children can reap the significant benefits of going to nursery school, and learning the communication skills in early ages can be the first one. Moreover, it gives the children the opportunity to practice being responsible and independent in addition to being familiar with society very soon. In overall, this is the occasionpreparing children for their adulthood. Secondly, they can vent their enormous energies in the right way direction by playing, singing, and practical activities based on various teaching methods which many parents do not have any awareness about them or even if they know knowing, they do not have any time to implement them. It also makes plausible for employed mothers to come back to work far soon when they are sure that their children are attended to by skilled people. Finally, kindergarten can flourish enhance children’s talents by the specific methods performed implemented according to the latest disciplines recommendeding by skilled psychologists and scholars and they may lead children to be valuable members of society in their future. In conclusion, while there are some different views as to whether going to kindergarten can be beneficial or not, I suppose that the obtained benefits of this attending outweigh the drawbacks.

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