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Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. There are many ideas concerning how young adults should live. Some point out that getting an independent life, as soon as possible, (?) is the best choice since being introduced to the society as an independent individual early in life can potentially help build social and financial skills; however, others object that this is not necessarily true since in today’s complicated world, people need more education concerning those skills and these can't be just learned (be learned just?) by/through/via having exposure to the social environment. I personally concur with the latter group, and I think that the current world is ever more complicated than before, and thus people should have more time to educate themselves academically, socially and economically. The academic skills are necessary for having a decent job in life,(?) while having more time to learn social and economic skills can help the individual avoid complexities like getting involved in a criminal act or getting in (into ?) huge debts depts. First, it's important to note that in order to have a fairly paying job, one absolutely needs education especially and academic one; however, if one starts living truly independent of their parents, they should also have an independent job. Besides, they should do daily chores like washing the dishes or the clothes or buying groceries; all of these take time that can be otherwise be spent studying, so the person would have a better job in the future. Secondly, too soon an exposure to the social environment without proper education regarding it can adversely affect an individual adversely. A person can be exposed to matters like addiction and criminal activities, and lack of economic expertise can even cause full bankruptcy. This is in direct contrast to the fact that some people think soon exposure to the society can help build socio‐economic(?) skills faster. At the end of the day, it's the individual’s decision what to do, but taking all the above factors in mind can help us understand that this decision is not a simple one since today’s world has changed so much so fast that the old living principles like "young adults should have an independent life" no longer hold.