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Task: some parents buy their children a large amount of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys? Nowadays, there are many plaything producers around the world, hence the number of toys in shops and houses is are increasing dramatically. While some people are in favor of purchasing multiple toys for kids, others believe that it will have many drawbacks. Both sides have their reasons that some of which will be discussed in this essay. Firstly, some claim that the best time to develop a person's skills is during his or her childhood and toys play a vital role in this regard. They believe that playing with a plaything will hone a child's skill such as practical and language talent. On the other hand, they assert that being busy with toys will develop both color recognition and hand‐eye coordination skills. In other words, the more toys, the more developed abilities. Secondly, others believe that having multiple toys has have many disadvantages that outweigh its advantages. At first, purchasing many much playthings will spoil children and will have adverse effects because children believe that they can obtain everything in their future life without any difficulties. In addition, and on the social side it can develop discrimination among wealthy and poor families children and frustrated lower levels of society, so psychologists claim that positive influence of toys will be paled by purchasing toys lavishly. In conclusion, I strongly believe that the best approach is to have everything in moderation and toys are no not exception. Simply put, (In other words,) we should buy playthings not only as an entertainment, but also to improve/hone children's skills, otherwise toys can be a threat for them as well as /and society.

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