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Dear Frank, As you know, I have applied for a master's degree in computer software engineering, and now I have gained admission from the UMBC. I want to achieve the degree to improve my knowledge in computer technologies, and also put an impressive edge in my résumé to compete in the developers’ world. I could not attain funds from the university, and not only the program fee, but also living in Maryland is a little bit too expensive for me, so, except the fee, I cannot afford even accommodation cost, to say nothing of food and other expenses. Therefore, I decided to find a part-time job in order to make a living and studying. Hopefully, I would like to arrange some employment before my departure date from Tehran to Maryland. Because you have vast communication and know many people in the software development market, I would like to ask you to do me a favor to introduce me to any of your friends who can help me to find a part-time job as a developer in his company. Your help means a lot to me, and thank you in advance. I am looking forward to seeing you soon. Best wishes, Ali

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In many major cities of the world, you will find large public buildings, both new and old. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of such buildings. How important is it for a country to construct impressive public buildings when houses are what is really required? Public buildings are the places which exist in all cities and are founded from public sources. In large cities we see more civil buildings because the need for these buildings has increased dramatically. First of all, it seems that constructing wonderful public buildings goes back to the past. For instance, the king of china China ordered to build the Great Wall of China which itswhose length is 21196.18 kilometers. On at that time the purpose of constructing this building structure was to prevent from enemy attack. Howeveralthough, many workers died for completing that building, but today it becomes is one of the most famous places in the world for the visitors. Moreover, these buildings give a city its character. Not only are these structures city pride but also impress both visitors and enemies. Besides, these structures attract tourists from all over the world which in turn brings about more job opportunities for city since according to the research each tourist creates jobs for four people. On the other hand, some people think that these structures waste the wealth of a country. They feel that governments want to show themselves to others in order to become more popular among the countries. In addition, it is the duty of the government to do its best for the people to build houses for them. This is a major issue which government should not overlook. This is why the role of the government is important in this regard. So overall, I believe that the right balance is the key of to this issue. The government should construct adequate houses for people while outstanding public buildings create a great sense of local and national pride.

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Although tourists in many countries are a significant source of revenue, they are frowned upon for various reasons. For the tourist, however, travelling is supposed to broaden the mind and be an educational experience. In what ways do you think travelling does this? And in what ways do you think travelling does the opposite? Travelling is full of ups and downs. Rest assured that the good far outweighs the bad. As a Well-said “The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only a page.” Travelling can teach people more than any university course about the culture, habits, traditions and the history of that country. While traveling, people not only learn about foreign cultures, but about their own culture. The differences between cultures make people finding out what makes their culture unique. Traveling nowadays has become an important part of modern life. Millions of people all over the world travel around their own countries and overseas as well. People travel to visit natural destinations such as seas, lakes, rivers, mountain ranges and deserts. It's always interesting to discover new things and other ways of life, to meet different people, taste different food, examine various architectural styles, visit museums and art galleries. It's common knowledge that travelling is a key to understanding other cultures and a wonderful opportunity to learn more about the world we live in. Therefore, travelling makes people to experience things that they could never experience at home. Although, there are ways to travel for less, and having little money or time should never stop people doing it. But, in reality, without money and time travel becomes far trickier. In exactly the same way, travelling depletes the bank balance. To sum up, I prefer to have a passport full of stamps than the house full of stuff.

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When you give money to charitable organizations, do you prefer to choose how to donation will be used (for example, donate money on food or service or advertisement for organizations) or leave the decision to the organizations? All people living in society have social duties to their community one of which is donation. There is a controversy among people on how to fulfill this task. Many believe that we should just give a donation to a reputable charity, and making a decision on how to spend money is their responsibility. However, others claim that donors have this right to decide about the money they give to the organizations. I personally agree with the former idea. To begin with, some people maintain that charities’ tasks are confined to collecting money and dividing it among the less fortunate. However, acquiring a reputation, non-profit organizations need expenditure on advertisements. In other words, should they be able to allocate a budget to advertisements, they could develop themselves and support more needy people. In my opinion, people’s trust is the most vital element which a charity needs to fulfill its duty. As a result, advertisements, in any form either digital marketing or sponsoring events, can help them to gain people’s trust and introduce themselves as trustworthy charities. Next, individuals being involved in charitable groups have a more realistic view of conditions’ of the needy. In fact, since they are at the center of poverty, they can reach to the right decision on priorities of the poor. For instance, most people who are not informed of their real needs prefer that their money goes on providing foods or attire. In contrast, charities have understood this point over time that providing education is the most viable and long-term solution and give priority to it, thereby rooting out poverty. In addition, some donors would rather send a donation for specific groups like Muslims or Christians. I personally hold this view that we are not in a position to determine who is in need of help more than others. Ito put it simply, we should care about all people around the world, regardless of religion, nationality and race. To make a long story short, making a decision about the needs of the less fortunate requires permanent presence in poor regions them which is a privilege that charities enjoy this privilege. Consequently, the community should leave the decision about spending money to non-profit organizations and spare no effort and money to support them financially.

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In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at nights unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this? In some parts of the US, adolescents are prohibited to be outside their home without their parents’ supervision after a certain hour. While the teenagers’ safety is of paramount significance, I would argue that there are many steps that the government can take to tackle safety problems. Many a hazards threatens teenagers in cities during nights. This is mostly because barely do these naïve people have adequate experience to survive from dangers in society. To start with, they can be abused by criminal adults or kidnapped. There is a pile of criminal cases in police offices including many teenagers as victims. They can easily be rubbed or mugged by offenders under cover of darkness when the police control pales. Moreover, youths may be led astray by their peers especially delinquent ones and commit crimes. Getting involved in detrimental activities such as using drugs can ruin their life. If teenagers are accompanied by an adult, they would be less likely to be approached by pedophiles. Apart from banning teenagers from being outside of their home alone, there are many measures which could be taken to remedy the situation. It is incumbent upon officials to make cities a safe place for all citizens regardless their age. Installing more video surveillance such as close circuit video cameras, police can control cities. These devices can act as a deterrent for offender since they would be recognized easily, hence prosecution. Enhancing Students’ Knowledge about safety issues, the education system could play an active role. Parents and teachers can raise students’ awareness and prepare them to enter society. Making environment safer and preparing youngsters are more beneficial than simply procrastinate stepping out of their comfort zone and encountering real threats. In conclusion, forbidding teenagers from being outside the house at midnight could be an effective way to preserve them but it should be a temporary solution until the government provides the required infrastructure for making cities safer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. It is obvious that in our modern life there are many diverse sources to update our information day by day such as ,Internet, different kind of newspaper, broadcast like satellites, Televisions and so on. From my point of view get information from many various news resources is more beneficial for a couple of reasons which I explain in this essay. The first and main reason which can be on the top and covers other reasons is " news accuracy" which means you have to be sure the news you heard is true. In other words, checking various source about a one news, it can guarantee the veracity of that news. In that case you must searching the news from national tv and newspapers even Internet. Besides, by chacking checking different sources you can distinguish between false and correct news report. For instance, there are some news items which have security stance aspects and almost the national tv and domestic newspapers do not consider correctly or completly. The worse and most recent example of this case can be the fall of the Ukrainian plane by the Iranian army. If there was no pressure from foreign governments, the Iranian government would not admiting the truth. Another important point is that, by reading diverse resources you can access more comprehensive information. Most of the sources belongs to one person or persons, they covers every part of the news which they wants, so you should use several media. For example, when Donald Trump, the 45th U.S president lectures, reports Iranian news agencies report wherever whatever is related to Iran or war but he might speaks about economic or astronomical expansions, so in some case you should survey national news and international news. Ultimately, because the news is one of the notable part of our life, so we must access authentic and plenary news that itwhich can be a little tough because the position of governments, so it should be better to read different resources and do we should not publish the news before you we are not sure of it.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. There are various mindsets about main factors which affect the children’s abilities personality in order to become a positive member in the different communities. Foremost, my firm conviction is that each individual’s personality is inextricably bound up with the manner of their nurture. In other words, parents have much of a role to play in their offspring’s upbringing and they are responsible for teaching them all essential features by which children will be successful as a member of society. In addition, only if parents put their every effort into observing a variety of rules themselves, will their charges succeed in this regard. For instance, those who do not respect such rules can eliminate plenty of social values which in turn causes next descendants to be negatively affected. On the other hand, school is another a very crucial factor in teaching peers students in order to play an effective role in the variable communities. Not only are students educated taught technical knowledge through schools but also they acquire a multitude of skills for their personal life. Therefore, from a social standpoint, an efficient educational system can assist children in/with their satisfactory interactions since this is an introductory community by which everyone can enhance their ability in teamwork. However, I strongly believe that the role of the parents and that of the schools are not mutually exclusive, so both of them can aid children in getting becoming good member of society. In terms of responsibility, parents and teachers both have a vital task in improving children’s behavior. Consequently, even though each of the mentioned factors is quite effective in conducting children’s conduct in order to be a positive member of society, I opine that parents besides schools brings about significant positive impacts on them.

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In League of Nations the parallelism of these two sexes are is supersensitive, so the government endeavors to adopts treat them equally. Totally I go along symmetric entrance, but we should remember some fields are not suitable for women or inverse. We must pay attention to development of society, that’s why it ishence the important importance of the necessity of experienced and mastered masters for as work force. Videlicet for instance, partly some majors likes diggings mining which is why formidable work fits to a man. Athwart on the other hand, unlike hard tasks, a gentle job needs graceful mentality. We should make every effort to maintain progress in existence. The main moot point is the effects of climate on the welfare of man, so. So, if needed we would accept the same extent number of students.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Regular exercise have been proved as one of the important part of a healthy life style. However, does increasing the number of gyms or sport clubs certainly result in better health status for the public? Accessibility and availability are the two most important factors in pursuing people to buy or consume different goods and services. Sport facilities, like any other goods will be consumed more if they are more available and accessible. Sincetherefore, increasing the number of gyms or yoga studios will facilitate regular exercising for people and result in a healthier population. In addition, when sport clubs are available all round a city, young people and teenagers in particular can use them easier and avoid from other exciting activities which are not suitable for them, like smoking or driving fast. While exercising is very important on to people’s health, there are several of other impressing factors which should be addressed to improve public health. For example, using healthy diet, regular checkups or screenings should also be facilitated for people in different areas. People in remote locations which who have little access to caregivers may postpone their necessary screening tests which could end up in a late diagnosis of Diabetes or Cancers and the consequences of this latency. Therefore, I think personally that although it is very important to have enough spaces and advances for exercising, this is not the only essential tool for improving the public health.