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Elnaz A, Foreign Educational Trips

2019-12-30T18:59:49+00:00

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In today's constantly evolving world, equipping children with the right tools to navigate their lives has become an important issue for most parents. A wide majority of parents tend to believe that they need to send their children on as many foreign trips as possible, in order for them to become independent and self-confident adults. While the advantages to this notion are numerous, there are also disadvantages associated with it, which will be further discussed. School trips have always been an inseparable part of any school curricula around the world and the real-life skills they provide pupils with is entirely clear. Foreign trips being an even more unique experience in any child's life, are definitely better teachers, in that they help children to face the world in all its diversity with less supervision than they are accustomed to. Not being constantly overseen by a chaperon, they learn how to take care of themselves. All that said, the memory of such trips is priceless and will always stick with them. Having named all these positive effects of educational travels abroad for children, there are a number of drawbacks to such amenities. Such trips may teach them a lot but would also take away a significant portion of their family time, leading to a more sparse society, full of strong individuals who do not feel a sense of belonging. Another downside to such travels is that they often take place during teenage years, when the child is most impressionable. Despite the educational purpose of such journeys, it must not be neglected that children go to an entirely new environment and might make choices they might regret in retrospect, such as doing drugs. To sum it up, educational foreign trips for children is are without any doubt a wonderful experience for them but may have negative impacts on their lives as well.

Mahtab, Governement and Diet

2019-12-30T18:59:28+00:00

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Are the governments doing well in educating people to pay attention to the importance of food nutrition and healthy eating? Whether the governments have fulfill their duty to encourage people to have a healthy diet has arouses a controversy among people for a decades. Many believe that the governments have not been successful in resolving this issue. However, others believe that the people in charge have exerted their influence on people’s lifestyles. I personally agree with the former. The first and foremost reason that comes to mind is statistics. The studies suggest that the obesity rate has escalated. As a result, had the governments taken decisive actions on this problem in the past, this rate would not have increased over time. Besides, we witness that the percentage of some chronic diseases such as diabetes and blood pressure which are linked to our nutrition has dramatically increased in recent years. This data shows that the governments have failed to make people aware of the significance of healthy eating. Nutrition-linked/stress-related Second, we can see all over the world that the number of fast-food restaurants is rising sharply compared to their healthy counterparts. It goes without saying that these restaurants provide their customers with only junk food including excessive fat. I personally hold that this rise in the number of this kind of restaurant pushes people to get poor nutrition. To discourage people from these types of foods, the state can impose a tax on these places. In addition, we can see vending machines everywhere that where people can buy various snacks such as cake, juice, coffee, and cookies from them, but unfortunately, most of them do not provide fruits or drinks without sugar. Given thatnonetheless, the governments can make people in charge of these machines put/include healthy snacks on the list of the items for the sale. To make a long story short, not only does a healthy diet increase individuals’ performance, but it also reduces the states’ expenditure on health. I wholeheartedly believe that the government should spare no effort and money to educate society in on good/healthy nutrition and support the producers of healthy foods.

Money Management

2019-12-30T18:59:16+00:00

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age . Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer . It is obviouse, children are the future of our soceity and they should learn many skills during they their childhood because one day they become adults. The Managing money skill is the one of the most essential and important skills which children should learn at young age. First of all, this money management at the young age prepares children for math at the school because they always count their own money. The researchers report about relationship between money management and math score by questionnaires given to of students in some schools. After researchers check of the responders' respondents' history math scores they figure out the students who were allowed to manage their own money, have a score higher on their math exams. For example my aunt taught her daughter how to count and manage her own money, so when she became younger older she was better in math than me and now she is a very successful accountant. Secondly, some parents think that if they give children great deal of money they can make them happier and they will be satisfied but in fact it never inhibits their desire and demands, so parents should teach them the concept of money . The children cannot appreciate money and they waste it because they do not know how they their parents earn money and how difficult to obtain. when the children undersntand which money is not easy to earn, they will know their parents' hardwork and they are cautious not to behave such that offends them. In addition, when children understand the value of money, they will always try their best to gain their achivement to earn more money from their parents. For instance, parents say you will get 100$ , if you get the highest grade in the class, certainly they will put their effort on into their tasks to accomplish the goal perfectly. Last but not least , this money managment is a kind of responsibility which means it learns teaches children to be responsible persons for money and other aspects. They should pay attention to spanding their money during the month because iftheir money runs out, they will have no more money until the next month. Ultimately, It is beneficial for children to learn how they should manage their own money at the young age because in this situation they can learn about money value , responsibility and the suffering of making money.

Narges, University

2019-12-30T18:59:04+00:00

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I personally accept that obtaining good results at school or university could bring some potential benefits but these successes do not necessarily lead to a successful life in the future. First of all, it can be seen that a well- educated as well as well- qualified person who has been top student at university is unable to become handy in the workplace. Because they can notcannot put their knowledge into action properly, and they do not know the way how to use their information to open any doors in the company that they work in. Besides, it is still possible to do well in life without good qualifications. Secondly, in some cases, achieving superb results at university leads to losing some chances. Bbecause top students spend a huge amount of their time studying, and they do not have enough time to socialize with people. In turn, they have less connections compared to ordinary people as well asand makes them lose some of the chances in their lives. It is important to strike an appropriate work-life balance. Too much time spent working can harm people’s social life and relationships. Consequently, sometimes, an individual is not capable of taking advantage of some opportunities in his/her life. However, I’m unable to close my eyes to the privileges which top students, due to their knowledge, have in their lives. For instance, a person who has graduated from a reputable university and has multitude knowledge could gain entry into a well-known company and find a satisfactory or a wellpaid occupation. Therefore, a good education could help a person to promote his/her life. In a nutshell, although accomplishing superb outcomes at university can help a person in his/her life, it doesn’t necessarily guarantee a successful life in the future.

Old and New Building

2019-12-30T18:58:51+00:00

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Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Many people would argue that the façade of buildings in a city plays an important role in reflecting the identity and characteristics of its community. Regarding preserving past heritage, there is a debate as to whether there should be policies for new structures to mimic their domestic architectural traditions. Although, I totally admire the objective of the idea, I believe to accept it thoroughly is to overlook significant changes in the modern worlds. Let’s begin by looking at the merits of the argument. It is needless to say that following traditional architecture as a symbol of cultural heritage, is invaluable. In this way, the new generations can find the opportunity to link to their ancestors and feel a strong connection to a profoundly worthy background as a cultural support. Moreover, traditionally in the past, houses were made by means of accessible materials existing in the environment. For example, in the north pole homes were made from of ice or in forests the houses were built mostly by with wood of the very forest of that area. Therefore, not only were houses totally recyclable, but also they looked visually in harmony with their surrounding nature. Turning to the other side of the argument, it must be said that the evolving world has changed the necessities of human’s humans’ house. Firstly, while in the previous centuries houses were huge and usually they were occupying extended areas of lands, in the new era due to the new increasing culture of individuality, plus heavy population density especially in big cities, turning to small apartments and sky scratchers scrapers seems inevitable. Moreover, in respect to the growing contemporary energy crisis, neglecting technological advances in urbanization like energy efficient walls and windows appears not to be feasible. Besides, new buildings using the latest materials and construction methods has have led to more strengthened structures in cases of confrontingin the event of natural disasters like earthquakes. To sum up, obliging mandating the local façade of the old architectures for instead of the new buildings could be a precious symbolic preserve for a society’s cultural heritage; however, the contemporary era has changed the human needs so much so that the previous answers to even housing style necessities does not seem logical.

Sara, Building

2019-12-30T18:58:28+00:00

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Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. The majority parts of cities’ culture are represented by buildings’ textures,. due to this reason, the relative importance to of buildings in is a frequent topic of discussion. While there is are arguments against constructing new buildings the same as the old-ones, a lot of people and I believe that structures should be built to response respond to their present needs. First of all, an advantage advantagous feature of keeping the house styles in the same shape with their old counterparts is tourist attraction; which means it makes a spectacular view and reflects people’s cultures. Therefore, increasing the rate of tourists causes leads to enhance enhancing the revenue of given regions. Although, this part of preserving culture is respectable, some materials which are used for building these structures are hazardous. To be more precise, utilizing these products for construction of buildings has negative effects on the environment. These days, the main method of architecture leads to use using environmental friendly materials. Additionally, human demand has changed since the world globalization. In put it simply, the main contributing factors of houses is completely different from the past. During the contemporary time, some facilities are needed in houses; hence buildings should be designed to answer all aspects of individual needs related to accommodations. In conclusion, following the same pattern for constructing buildings involves some expense. Not only does maintenance of this kind of building costs a lot of money but also the percentage of waste of energy in these kinds of buildings are is more than its modern counterpart. In order to, architects should use modern technology for designing new houses, such as using sustainable energy.