Mondays GMAT-GRE-TOEFL-IELTS-آموزشگاه زبان صبای سحر-چمران جنوب، بلوار جلال آل احمد، جنب داروخانه شبانه روزی جلال آل احمد، پلاک 87، طبقه سوم تلفن: 42-88679341 https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/444-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-07-22 2024-05-03T08:16:07+00:00 IELTSTOEFLCENTER info@ieltstoeflcenter.com Joomla! - Open Source Content Management Bina, Job Satisfaction 2019-10-15T18:33:45+00:00 2019-10-15T18:33:45+00:00 https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/444-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-07-22/3197-bina-job-satisfaction Hamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.07.22/Bina, Job Satisfaction.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Agree or disagree? In general, finding a career/job/work/occupation is both a tough and an important stage of every individual’s life, but finding a suitable occupation one would be even more challenging. Job security is as important as job satisfaction, so I disagree with the statement for three reasons. In the first place, staying unemployed is an unpleasant experience. Furthermore, even a secure position would be a good experience and finally, it may change your opinion about that position. To begin with, although choosing a career may put people under a lot of pressure, staying unemployed is a more stressful situation. People need to become independent and working is the first step of this process. You cannot settle down waiting for an enjoyable occupation while you lose your chance of having a decent less delightful job. My uncle’s experience is a compelling example of this idea. He dropped his proper job in order to find a more delightful activity. Having said that at the end he lost not only his former career but his opportunities to get many secure jobs just to find a “satisfying job.” Secondly, being occupied in an area would be a great experience no matter how unsatisfying your job would be. Working in any area is not considered a waste of time due to the fact that by working you gain precious experiences. You can use your previous experiences for to finding future jobs. That is why it is better for people to accept the a secure occupation and look for a suitable job simultaneously. According to a conducted study on employed people, an individual who had had has a secure job and many job experiences tends to find a desirable job easier than people who refuse to receive a secure position. Last but not least, it is not reasonable to estimate a career based on what we heard about it. It is more intellectual to enter that specific area and then decide whether it is a pleasant job for us or not. Sometimes working in a field changes your view point about that spot the post which is why sometimes it is better to not sit waiting for a desirable job. For instance, I thought being a lawyer was not going to make me happy but I gave it a try and much to my surprise it was the exact work that I was looking for. Last but not leastto cut a long story short, the aforementioned points and examples have illustrated that I am not in favor of the statement for three reasons. First, you cannot be an unemployed forever just because you think that an activity is not as satisfying as you assumed. Moreover, it is going to be a good experience. Next, your point of view might be changed about that career. I opine that people should give a chance to secure jobs and do not take it hard on themselves in order to be more happy and satisfied.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.07.22/Bina, Job Satisfaction.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Agree or disagree? In general, finding a career/job/work/occupation is both a tough and an important stage of every individual’s life, but finding a suitable occupation one would be even more challenging. Job security is as important as job satisfaction, so I disagree with the statement for three reasons. In the first place, staying unemployed is an unpleasant experience. Furthermore, even a secure position would be a good experience and finally, it may change your opinion about that position. To begin with, although choosing a career may put people under a lot of pressure, staying unemployed is a more stressful situation. People need to become independent and working is the first step of this process. You cannot settle down waiting for an enjoyable occupation while you lose your chance of having a decent less delightful job. My uncle’s experience is a compelling example of this idea. He dropped his proper job in order to find a more delightful activity. Having said that at the end he lost not only his former career but his opportunities to get many secure jobs just to find a “satisfying job.” Secondly, being occupied in an area would be a great experience no matter how unsatisfying your job would be. Working in any area is not considered a waste of time due to the fact that by working you gain precious experiences. You can use your previous experiences for to finding future jobs. That is why it is better for people to accept the a secure occupation and look for a suitable job simultaneously. According to a conducted study on employed people, an individual who had had has a secure job and many job experiences tends to find a desirable job easier than people who refuse to receive a secure position. Last but not least, it is not reasonable to estimate a career based on what we heard about it. It is more intellectual to enter that specific area and then decide whether it is a pleasant job for us or not. Sometimes working in a field changes your view point about that spot the post which is why sometimes it is better to not sit waiting for a desirable job. For instance, I thought being a lawyer was not going to make me happy but I gave it a try and much to my surprise it was the exact work that I was looking for. Last but not leastto cut a long story short, the aforementioned points and examples have illustrated that I am not in favor of the statement for three reasons. First, you cannot be an unemployed forever just because you think that an activity is not as satisfying as you assumed. Moreover, it is going to be a good experience. Next, your point of view might be changed about that career. I opine that people should give a chance to secure jobs and do not take it hard on themselves in order to be more happy and satisfied.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Nasrin, Price for Buying Products 2019-10-15T18:33:33+00:00 2019-10-15T18:33:33+00:00 https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/444-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-07-22/3196-nasrin-price-for-buying-products Hamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.07.22/Nasrin, Price for Buying Products.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Some people believe that price is the only consideration when buying something. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples. The Price of merchandise is the first thing that usually crosses individuals’ mind when it comes to buying. Trying to be under/within budget, people mostly opt for products which cost a more reasonable price. I would argue that other factors also play an active role on in experiencing a profitable trade. Price of a merchandise commodity includes cost of raw material, manufacturing, shipping and market. The difference between a cheap product and an expenditure expensive one is because of the factors which is are mentioned above. In recent ages years numerous producers have been sacrificing the quality to reach a lower price which helps them to sell more and gain more profits. The increasingly growth of the chain markets all over the world which provide cheap clothes and merchandise with low quality and the vast majority of people who buy from these stores prove that people tend to have more goods with more diversity despite of their poor quality. Cheap merchandise badly affects people’s life. To start with, an affordable price motivates people to buy more. From my own experience when a product is offered to me with an inexpensive price I recklessly buy it without considering the exact use of it. Hence with the regret of buying a pile of useless clothes. Besides, buyers have to dispose of poor quality goods sooner than high quality ones. The huge mass of waste which especially contains clothes indicate that it is not an environmentally friendly trend. By considering the cost of human resources, raw material and natural resources which are used to produce one product it is not economical to buy a poor quality one which could not last long. As the British have always been said ‘I am not that rich to buy cheap products’. In conclusion, I opine that the price of merchandise is the first thing/factor that individuals regard but other factors are equally important. Some factors like the quality, use/functionality and impact of this product on the environment are more essential for choosing a product.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.07.22/Nasrin, Price for Buying Products.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Some people believe that price is the only consideration when buying something. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples. The Price of merchandise is the first thing that usually crosses individuals’ mind when it comes to buying. Trying to be under/within budget, people mostly opt for products which cost a more reasonable price. I would argue that other factors also play an active role on in experiencing a profitable trade. Price of a merchandise commodity includes cost of raw material, manufacturing, shipping and market. The difference between a cheap product and an expenditure expensive one is because of the factors which is are mentioned above. In recent ages years numerous producers have been sacrificing the quality to reach a lower price which helps them to sell more and gain more profits. The increasingly growth of the chain markets all over the world which provide cheap clothes and merchandise with low quality and the vast majority of people who buy from these stores prove that people tend to have more goods with more diversity despite of their poor quality. Cheap merchandise badly affects people’s life. To start with, an affordable price motivates people to buy more. From my own experience when a product is offered to me with an inexpensive price I recklessly buy it without considering the exact use of it. Hence with the regret of buying a pile of useless clothes. Besides, buyers have to dispose of poor quality goods sooner than high quality ones. The huge mass of waste which especially contains clothes indicate that it is not an environmentally friendly trend. By considering the cost of human resources, raw material and natural resources which are used to produce one product it is not economical to buy a poor quality one which could not last long. As the British have always been said ‘I am not that rich to buy cheap products’. In conclusion, I opine that the price of merchandise is the first thing/factor that individuals regard but other factors are equally important. Some factors like the quality, use/functionality and impact of this product on the environment are more essential for choosing a product.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Niloofar, Friends 2019-10-15T18:33:21+00:00 2019-10-15T18:33:21+00:00 https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/444-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-07-22/3195-niloofar-friends Hamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.07.22/Niloofar, Friends.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Do you agree ro disagree with the following statement . It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends - use specific reasons and examples to support your answer . Friends are one of the most precious gifts in our life that we cannot live without them. That’s why everyone has needs a person to telling them something without being afraid ofto judgement . In addition , they are the most impressive keys factors in our life because some friends can help you to catch yourself up ,. in contrast, they can knock you down , so be careful in choosing a friend . According to my way of thinkingin my view , it is not important they are your old friends or a new one it is just depends on your personality and they theirs . you can have a new friend with a great option trait like honesty that it is the most important element between two people in any relationships . Another important facts is that , the situation changes everything even your best and old friends , so you must find a person with stable personality stability . In my personal experience , I made a new friend indeed she is my best friend in my whole life despite alyhough we are have been friends for four years when i am struggling with my tough problems she always sympathizes with me and gives me peace and solutions . she never judges me and i can easily say whatever in my mind and heart . I count on her in any circumstancues circumstances and she has became become my unnon-biological sister . Conversely , my fiftheen years friends changed when her situation became better although i wished best things for her , she thought i was jealous on of her . Anyway , Ultimately , a time is the last things that you must pay attention toattend in a friendships . This is significent significant that you feel comfortable , safe , clam , honest with someone and you can be yourself , so we must attempt to find a true friend, not old friends ones .</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.07.22/Niloofar, Friends.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Do you agree ro disagree with the following statement . It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends - use specific reasons and examples to support your answer . Friends are one of the most precious gifts in our life that we cannot live without them. That’s why everyone has needs a person to telling them something without being afraid ofto judgement . In addition , they are the most impressive keys factors in our life because some friends can help you to catch yourself up ,. in contrast, they can knock you down , so be careful in choosing a friend . According to my way of thinkingin my view , it is not important they are your old friends or a new one it is just depends on your personality and they theirs . you can have a new friend with a great option trait like honesty that it is the most important element between two people in any relationships . Another important facts is that , the situation changes everything even your best and old friends , so you must find a person with stable personality stability . In my personal experience , I made a new friend indeed she is my best friend in my whole life despite alyhough we are have been friends for four years when i am struggling with my tough problems she always sympathizes with me and gives me peace and solutions . she never judges me and i can easily say whatever in my mind and heart . I count on her in any circumstancues circumstances and she has became become my unnon-biological sister . Conversely , my fiftheen years friends changed when her situation became better although i wished best things for her , she thought i was jealous on of her . Anyway , Ultimately , a time is the last things that you must pay attention toattend in a friendships . This is significent significant that you feel comfortable , safe , clam , honest with someone and you can be yourself , so we must attempt to find a true friend, not old friends ones .</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Prisoners 2019-10-15T18:33:07+00:00 2019-10-15T18:33:07+00:00 https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/444-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-07-22/3194-prisoners Hamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.07.22/Prisoners.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being behind bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays crimes in some countries has have been gone beyond the alarming rates,. Therefore, prisons in almost all over the world has have become full of criminals. I am completely convinced that doing unpaid works punishment in society should be replaced instead of jails punishment for criminals but this is not true for all of them. The reason which makes me believe that doing community works punishment like painting streets or bus stops and cleaning cities without paying money should be issued instead of imprisonments of criminals is that not every body iswere not born a criminals and also there should be a second chance for those who did crime. Plus not only does jail punishment costs government a fortune but also there are lots of side effects both on criminals and society. For instance teenagers who do robberies for having food might learn the worst behavior by going to jail. In my view, correctional facilities should tutor them to be good persons in society by forcing them to do community works. In addition, a person who has murdered someone differs from a person who stool stole foods because their mother family waswere starving and they have no money to buy foods. A person who does some crimes which have side effectsimpact on the community like murdering someone should be punished hard or even get them death penalty. Besides history of criminals and their records should be considered and it is one of the most important factors to decide whether unpaid works in the community is enough or jail punishment should be issued. There is a chance a criminals who does not have a previous crimes records to be corrected in contrast criminals who have a previous crimes crime record is stands no chance to be corrected. The former deserves an easy/soft/lenient punishment while the letter latter should be imprisoned. To be conclude, some with no previous crime records and commit commission of crimes which do are not harmful for society can be corrected. Thus doing unpaid community works are is a better punishment for them.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.07.22/Prisoners.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being behind bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays crimes in some countries has have been gone beyond the alarming rates,. Therefore, prisons in almost all over the world has have become full of criminals. I am completely convinced that doing unpaid works punishment in society should be replaced instead of jails punishment for criminals but this is not true for all of them. The reason which makes me believe that doing community works punishment like painting streets or bus stops and cleaning cities without paying money should be issued instead of imprisonments of criminals is that not every body iswere not born a criminals and also there should be a second chance for those who did crime. Plus not only does jail punishment costs government a fortune but also there are lots of side effects both on criminals and society. For instance teenagers who do robberies for having food might learn the worst behavior by going to jail. In my view, correctional facilities should tutor them to be good persons in society by forcing them to do community works. In addition, a person who has murdered someone differs from a person who stool stole foods because their mother family waswere starving and they have no money to buy foods. A person who does some crimes which have side effectsimpact on the community like murdering someone should be punished hard or even get them death penalty. Besides history of criminals and their records should be considered and it is one of the most important factors to decide whether unpaid works in the community is enough or jail punishment should be issued. There is a chance a criminals who does not have a previous crimes records to be corrected in contrast criminals who have a previous crimes crime record is stands no chance to be corrected. The former deserves an easy/soft/lenient punishment while the letter latter should be imprisoned. To be conclude, some with no previous crime records and commit commission of crimes which do are not harmful for society can be corrected. Thus doing unpaid community works are is a better punishment for them.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Shabnam, Punishment 2019-10-15T18:32:55+00:00 2019-10-15T18:32:55+00:00 https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/444-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-07-22/3193-shabnam-punishment Hamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.07.22/Shabnam, Punishment.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? One of the necessary aspects of growing raising a child is the ability to know the difference between good and bad from the first years off his life. Some people believe that these could be approached through punishing a child. I think that there could be more better ways to teach children and punishment could only be considered in specific situations. Today there are still those who believe that the only way to manage a child is punishment. This opinion is mostly popular among older parents and others who are not educated enough. However, the first message punishment sends is that the child is not a good person. Another bad idea the child understands is it is acceptable for older people to use their ability to bully others, especially when it is a physical behavior. There are better ways which punishment could be replaced by thempunishment. When children are in a group, for example a group of classmates, they could be taught easier. Not only do they feel that the rule is for everybody, but also they could be encouraged to obey the rules in a group. Furthermore, parents and teachers should be conscious about their own behavior as they are role models for youngers youngsters.Sanctions And time _out are some alternatives for those who do not understand the advantages of right tasks. For example, a teacher could sometimes ask a student to stay in the classroom while others are leaving the place for a break. To Sum up, despite the fact that many people support the idea of punishing elderlies children to Improve their consciousness, I believe that it is not true. There are better ways to have a disciplined young community. I think it is the government’s duty to teach caregivers how to behave with toward the younger ones.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.07.22/Shabnam, Punishment.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? One of the necessary aspects of growing raising a child is the ability to know the difference between good and bad from the first years off his life. Some people believe that these could be approached through punishing a child. I think that there could be more better ways to teach children and punishment could only be considered in specific situations. Today there are still those who believe that the only way to manage a child is punishment. This opinion is mostly popular among older parents and others who are not educated enough. However, the first message punishment sends is that the child is not a good person. Another bad idea the child understands is it is acceptable for older people to use their ability to bully others, especially when it is a physical behavior. There are better ways which punishment could be replaced by thempunishment. When children are in a group, for example a group of classmates, they could be taught easier. Not only do they feel that the rule is for everybody, but also they could be encouraged to obey the rules in a group. Furthermore, parents and teachers should be conscious about their own behavior as they are role models for youngers youngsters.Sanctions And time _out are some alternatives for those who do not understand the advantages of right tasks. For example, a teacher could sometimes ask a student to stay in the classroom while others are leaving the place for a break. To Sum up, despite the fact that many people support the idea of punishing elderlies children to Improve their consciousness, I believe that it is not true. There are better ways to have a disciplined young community. I think it is the government’s duty to teach caregivers how to behave with toward the younger ones.</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> Young Adults 2019-10-15T18:32:40+00:00 2019-10-15T18:32:40+00:00 https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/mondays/444-monday-writing-workshop-1398/writing-workshop-monday-98-07-22/3192-young-adults Hamed hamedjafari1374@gmail.com <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.07.22/Young Adults.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? The rate of the young generation in some countries has dramatically increased. Due to this, the number of young people is more than old-ones in these countries. Although there are a lot of benefits for countries such as the youth young workforce, I completely believe that disadvantages of it are more. One of the most important advantages of the a young generation is the efficient and viable workforce who are full of energy and most of them are ambitious and make an effort to change countries ‘policy in the best way, which results in a powerful economic economy for countries. On the other hand, when the percentage of young citizens has increased, they are confronted with significant problems like a lack of opportunities to find job. In the simple words, it is a very hard work task for governments to provide careers work for all of them. A common cause of job shortage is that the growing growth of the crime rate, consequently, it has enormous side effects on countries’ cultures. In the second argument, it is obvious that old people have valuable job and life experiences which are achieved in all of aspects and they have free flow of information compared to young-ones. Because of them, they can tackle problems efficiently in the a variety of situations. In addition, the more young citizens need the more educational schemes. By lacking of the elderly who are professional, the young face a lot of issues which they may not be able tocannot cope withthem. By way of conclusion, although, the rate of the old population compared to the young-ones in some countries over the world has considerably dropped, I completely believe that the negative effects of this phenomenon are more andmuch more than the meritspositive of them. These countries should spent spend a lot of money for providing young people with suitable facilities which they need during their life .</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p> </p> <table border="1" width="80%" align="center"> <tbody> <tr> <td> <p dir="rtl" align="center"><span style="color: #ff0000; font-size: medium;">جهت مشاهده Writing تصحیح شده فایل PDF را دانلود نمایید.</span></p> <p align="center"><a href="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Workshop/Wirting/Mondays/1398/Writing Workshop Monday 98.07.22/Young Adults.pdf"><img src="http://ieltstoeflcenter.com/Download/Download-Button.png" /></a></p> <p dir="ltr" align="left">At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? The rate of the young generation in some countries has dramatically increased. Due to this, the number of young people is more than old-ones in these countries. Although there are a lot of benefits for countries such as the youth young workforce, I completely believe that disadvantages of it are more. One of the most important advantages of the a young generation is the efficient and viable workforce who are full of energy and most of them are ambitious and make an effort to change countries ‘policy in the best way, which results in a powerful economic economy for countries. On the other hand, when the percentage of young citizens has increased, they are confronted with significant problems like a lack of opportunities to find job. In the simple words, it is a very hard work task for governments to provide careers work for all of them. A common cause of job shortage is that the growing growth of the crime rate, consequently, it has enormous side effects on countries’ cultures. In the second argument, it is obvious that old people have valuable job and life experiences which are achieved in all of aspects and they have free flow of information compared to young-ones. Because of them, they can tackle problems efficiently in the a variety of situations. In addition, the more young citizens need the more educational schemes. By lacking of the elderly who are professional, the young face a lot of issues which they may not be able tocannot cope withthem. By way of conclusion, although, the rate of the old population compared to the young-ones in some countries over the world has considerably dropped, I completely believe that the negative effects of this phenomenon are more andmuch more than the meritspositive of them. These countries should spent spend a lot of money for providing young people with suitable facilities which they need during their life .</p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table>