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Unpaid Community Services , Dariush

2015-10-03T08:16:36+00:00

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some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity , improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? In this rapidly changing world , the pace of population growth has increased beyond our expectation. Nonetheless, solidarity among the people is still a prominent merit that under no circumstances should be downplayed. In other words , as a member of this "United Nations" we have to deal with hustles and bustles which have altered our lifestyle undoubtedly. We have to be well prepared in order to cope with recent challenging phenomenon phenomenon for instance "illiteracy", "Unemployment" and "Poverty" that have has prevailed all around the world . In spite of short comings regarding free working that we cannot can not underestimate , these activities careers which have to be done by teenagers help them in several aspects inevitably. First and foremost , such activities can agitate the responsibility sense of human beings. For example by participating in charity activities we can understandperceive the impediments and limitations that other people or patients are facing face in their daily life .in other words ,not only can we broaden our horizons to understand our surroundings better, but also they create bilateral mutual understanding between people and society. Secondly , working in favor of no salary , can help young people realize that "money doesn't grow on trees" . this approach helps them try and try more to achieve their aspirations. In stark contrast , some opponents argue that these exploitations can be counterproductive which will show their disruptive role in our future life. To sum up , from my perspective , education plays a crucial role in facilitating people's lifestyle. The more materials that people are nurtured with , the more the much tools that they can apply in their life to mold their life appropriately. A bit off‐topic/ good words./few mistakes in grammar and word use

Televesion+Parents'Qualities+Most Importsnt Period, Samira

2015-10-03T08:15:35+00:00

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There is nothing that young people can teach older people. Many people believe that young people have nothing to teach older people. Of course, older people have more experience and knowledge than us. However, that does not mean that we young people have nothing to teach them. I disagree with this statement for several reasons and I support the idea that there are things/issues information something that young people know but older people have no idea about haven't know and therefore they can learn from us. Long time ago, when science and technology had not developed did not develop yet, this statement might have been be true because . Because young people just learned from older people's experience and books they wrote. But nowadays, with the development of technology, young people learn many things anything through means of mass communication and we can teach the elderly. Computers are is one good example. Two years ago, my mom did not know how to use a computer. I had to teach her a lot and now, she can use it computer easily or surf the web without my direction, so . So no reason why this statement is still true today. Needless to say, older people have much more experience and knowledge than the younger ones, so we should learn a great deal from them very much. However, partly their knowledge and experience are partly outdated and the pace of technological technology development is too fast for them to follow. Young people have more time, sharper brains, and (they) are more creative and flexible, and therefore (they) can learn and do many any things with much of all their enthusiasm. For example, we now have email, messengers, webcam and other developments. so on. It is extremely so difficult for the elderly to be familiar with these gadgets and we can teach them how to use them. In conclusion, I believe that there are numerous issues/areas/fields/things lots of things and subjects in life on the life that we should learn from old individuals, but . But, I have personally realized that there is absolutely something that old men do not / don't know about. We can teach old people to get familiar with modern technologies in many ways. Reasoning from this, they can find out that technological technique inventions are fantastic. Some people believe watching TV is bad for children. Others believe it is a good thing. Today, television has become a popular form of entertainment. Many people think that this kind of entertainment is good for children while others do not agree with this idea. In my opinion, watching television is not good for children because of several reasons. First, television contains many harmful/destructive/bad programs which might lead to them getting involved in criminal activities. In fact, lots of children are highly influenced by violent films which often appear on TV. Some of them become so familiar with violence that they themselves have a tendency to use violence in schools. Moreover, advertising, which sometimes presents expensive items such as mobile phones, mp3 or laptops, cause children to waste a lot of money on them. In some cases, a small number of children even steal their parent's money just because of their desire for something. Therefore, I feel that TV is not really a healthy entertainment medium for children. Secondly, TV is sometimes the main reason for bad performance of children in schools. Many children spend lots of time watching TV because it has so many interesting programs. It is for certain that the more time children spend watching TV the less time they use for studying. In addition, spending so much time in front of the TV often poses a bad heath risk . Finally, TV can have a very negative bad influence on the minds of growing children, and can seriously affect their studies. We ought to introduce them to other activities that have advantages for them, such as playing football and swimming. However, Although we cannot deny that television, in moderation, can be a good thing. For instance, preschoolers can get help learning the alphabet on public television. Additionally, parents can keep up with current events on the evening news. There is no doubt about it, TV can be an excellent educator and entertainer. But despite its advantages, too much television can be detrimental because it sets them up for obesity, poor academic performance at school, and it is harmful to a child's development. In conclusion, TV viewing is like a doubleedged sword that can be used in a positive or negative way. Early exposure to television is detrimental to children's health, academic performance, and brain development. Parents should make their own decisions about whether to have TV in at their houses. It is their responsibility to make sure that their children's creativity is enhanced through watching TV. What are the characteristics of an effective parent? Parents have important dues for training their children and it is wise that they have the enormous qualities, if they want to make a success of their behavior with their children. The main factor as for the good characters of parents is their knowledge of how to behave towards with them children. Parents should obtain/get enough information on every aspect related to children before making a decision to have a child. Therefore, the most principal quality of good parents is being knowledgeable. Moreover, they should be tender toward children's manners. Parents should know how to treat children. It is necessary for parents to be aware of the children's children's' needs, and the problems related to their ages and sense. They should even study about necessities of children at the various ages and try to behave properly accurately towards with them. For example, children who are at the age of 5 to 12 are so sensitive and emotional in which case parents have has to use a kind tone the slow accent dealing with them and try to explain everything calmly. In contrast, at the age of over 15 upper than 15, teenagers /adolescents children should not be considered as children a child anymore. They need to be spoken with in a different ways from what was which were in their childhood. After this age, they usually ask parents to pay more attention to their comments and take them more serious. If parents do not doesn't know how to communicate with children at various ages, it might hurt their feeling and make them emotional or violent in the future. Parents should have a tender behavior in different situations with their children. All Children can be persuaded with the friendly manner of their parents because in this way, they feel their parents really understand them. As it has been shown in parents' experiences they don't reach acceptable results when they behave violently and too strict with children. As a result, being a tender and temperate person in different situations with children is a main quality of the good parenting. From my view of point, parents have high responsibilities to educate their children correctly in the society. Therefore, they should be punctual and careful about their behaviors with their children in the family and two important characters are being aware of all aspects of children and having tolerance in behaving towards with children when they make a mistake. Childhood is the most significant time in an individual's life. There are four major periods of time in the life of a normal person: the childhood, the adolescence, the adulthood and the old age. Each of them has its own impact on one's life so it is not easy to judge which one is the most important. Some people have the an impression that the childhood time is the most significant period of the four since it is the beginning of a human's life. However, from my perspective, it is not childhood years that are the most important in our life but the adolescent years are. Firstly, on the psychological ground, while children can only learn some simple and primitive feelings such as love and hate during their childhood time, adolescents become familiar with adolescence has them acknowledged many other essential emotions like pride, sympathy, desire, even frustration and jealousy. and so on. From those experiences, a child grows up mentally and builds his own personality which is, without a doubt, one of the most important factors that decide whether a person could be successful in life or not. Furthermore, from this time onward, a teenager has to learn to deal with emotions, relationships or pressure and try to adapt to the society he lives in as other people start to recognize him as an independent individual, not as a child anymore. Besides, this is also the time when that a person has to make many important decisions which can be considered turning points of his life, such as which career he should take. Secondly, on the physical ground, even though a man's height grows up in the fastest way during his childhood years, it is in the adolescence time that his body undertakes crucial changes. Those changes have a large influence on a person physically as his or her body develops rapidly in just two or three years and gets ready for marriage and having children. In addition, adolescence is a significant time for a person to improve his overall health. A teenager who had a bad health during his childhood can improve make his health better with a suitable diet and regular physical exercises. On the other hand, if a man has a bad lifestyle in this crucial time, his health will take the damage and result in a weak body in his adulthood despite the fact that he was once one time a healthy child. In conclusion, while a child explores the world in a naïve way and grows up in his family's protection during childhood years, as he turns into a teenager, he has to confront many issues by himself, both problems and opportunities since it is the time when many crucial physical and mental changes take place. Hence, (For those reasons above), I strongly believe that adolescence period has the deepest /strongest influence on a human's life

Teaching Children to be Good Person in Society, Mohsen

2015-10-03T08:15:02+00:00

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good person in society., Others, however, believe that school is a place to learn this. Discuss both these vies and give your own opinion. There are two points of view about who should thought teach an innocent child to be a good member of society. Firstly, those who argue that parents must teach them, and the others who believe in professional teachers in school who should carry out do this process. First of all, we must not forget that parents are the first teachers of their child and their children spend at least six years learning from the parents' reactions in real life. Therefore, so caring a parents is are one those who knows how to act as a good person in front of their kids in family as a small society. The parents's behavior not only does affect their children, but also it shows them the other people's reaction to a decent nice manner. Second of all, schools are a bigger society group in which kids starts to relate with their peers and could be tough taught in different deferent situations. School's teachers should teach/educate/train/nurture thought them how to behave and be a kind person in society. However, all these theories must be adopted taken in cooperation action with their parents. Like other fields of sports and or science exams, schools also can represent achievements for children's act of kindness such as helping their teachers or peers. In conclusion, in my opinion both parents as first teachers and professional school's teachers have the main role in creating a useful and good person in society from a child. The more we raise arose our children's awareness about being a good humankind, the better society we would have in future.

Teaching Children How to be Good Members of Society, Alireza

2015-10-03T08:13:19+00:00

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. There is no room for doubt that children need to be educated/trained/taught learned in order to be effective members of society. Question of whether this should be done by school or their parents is a matter of dispute. Some people are of the opinion that this is the parents' duty, because every child starts learning, when they are born, so parents can play a crucial role in their education, when they are nurturing their children. Even thought, this responsibility could be divided between the child's mother and their father as well, we should not ignore the roles of the other family members, since they have a direct effect on their children. For instance, parents could get advice from their relatives, who have has enough experience. On the other hand, other people argue (put forward the view) that school is the place that young children should be taught, because not only can their teachers apply this better since they have done this before but also classes are in fact kind of a small society. As a result, children can communicate with their peers, who are part of future society as well. Furthermore, experienced teachers with an effective education system formed by the government could more and more affect teaching, so pupils learn each skill according to by their age. Personally, I believe that both points of view have their merits. Therefore, this responsibility must be divided between parents and school. By doing this, children will learn how to be effective persons, when they are mature. Consequently, in the future, when children become parents they are in capable of teaching their own children

Music, Mehdi

2015-10-03T08:11:56+00:00

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Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and society. Others ,however ,think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Music which is widely welcomed nowadays has roots in almost every culture, albeit the appearance of it can be different in any society.so the impression of music even in ancient times cannot be denied anyway. It can also represent the country's intellectual activities as well as art and humanities art. Music which is today involved with our daily lifestyle is an advanced form of gradual promoting over a centuries, so the need of the human spiritual to it is undeniable and with scientific growth over recent decades more practical evidence for benefits of music is more tangible and available. A new survey by JIS university has found that people who are used to listening to music almost an hour a day can live a healthier life and individuals who have has this habit attribute can live longer than others. Music these days is not only restricted to youngsters but also it can have an positive impression on elderly or senior citizens, too. Which with such a variety of choices between all genres of music such as rock, pop, hip hop, traditional, instrumental or even metal, no one can walk away from it and just argue that the music completely doesn't just fit me. Besides above advantages, with this mechanical lifestyle music can play a huge role in relaxing to relax and get us rid of daily routines life. But in on the other hand, one might argue that music can have a negative impression on all spectra of populace specifically the young generation and leads them to depression but in my perception it's totally vice versa. although some genres of music are is a bit more offensive and more aggressive, rushing but the point is we should be permissive about this issue and do not claiming others' tastes as wrong, which is also a matter of concern even in our country where that one might say for example the rock or metal fans are somehow psychopaths or such attributes/characteristics adjective as the same which is ridiculous. To sum it up, in my perception, music is an essential element of individuals' life and it can also boost your motivation and can change the way your life is going on, so I firmly believe that music can have a good impression on humans' daily life and is highly needed.

Life Experience - Amirehsan

2015-10-03T08:11:28+00:00

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Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In learning about life, the advice of family is more important than personal experience. Please give specific reasons, details, and examples to develop your essay. Dr. Parvize Hessobi, the father of modern physics in Iran, is well‐known for his brilliant academic achievements but also the way he finds his way through the life and learns new things which give him a admiration and bring him to this sky‐high position. How do Dr. Hessobi and other successful persons learn their most important lessons in their life? Some people believe the family's help and listening to their advice is the key factor in to learning important life's lessons. Conversely, other persons are on of this opinion that personal experience is more important. When it comes to this debate, I choose the latter notion due to following reasons. First and foremost, most of the time the best way of learning on a phenomenon is doing it. In some cases the only way of learning is experiencing or trying. For instance, consider the situation you want to learn how to drive and you can consult to world's best drivers. Do you think after all the advice from this these experts you could you still even park your car in your garage? Obviously, the answer is no. Thus, how could anyone teach the most important lesson by just listening to the advice of limited member of the family who are not complete and successful in their own lives. In the second place, every action that we do involves some requirement before it and is followed by other actions. As experiencing is not exempt except from this rule prior to doing everything we need to get introduced to that action or problem and the best way to be ing familiarizing with to it is to speaking to some experts on that field. Accordingly, having a try in life's problems involving getting advice and listening to the specialists and consult with them. Thus, by experiencing the life's problems personally we have the advice of our convenience family. Finally, by considering the world as a dynamic system, every advice from the family member is not approvable to the current time because their they guidelines are based on their time of experience. Moreover, the counselor consular have a different personality and talents which analyze the life from his perspective. For example, when I wanted to go to university I talked to my elder/older brother who is the most similar one to me about selecting my major. Now after losing five years of my life I have come to a point where come to the situation that I want to change my field from computer science to a totally different one such as politics. Getting advice from my brother showed me that do not to trust in anyone but myself everyone except the case that one is yourself. Thus, the only way for learning in life is experiencing it just by yourself

High Tech Monitoring, Melisa

2015-10-03T08:10:43+00:00

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In a world of high tech, we are surrounded by many security gadgets such as, digital voice, and telephone recorder and security cameras. Also, we are monitoring being monitored daily by these items. These gadgets bring us comfortable and welfare. There are so many benefits in comparison with drawbacks. First of all, police and some security agencies have applied these security devices to prevent the crimes. Likewise, they have utilized them to follow up and discover detect the criminals and the reason of the crime such as, kidnapping, trafficking and all kinds of theft especially from the bank. Secondly, some organizations and workplaces exploit these smart devices as a controller for their employees to check the performance and detect the efficient employeestaff. Moreover, they can promote the position of their organization by this system. Besides, using these security devices is an affordable method in economic terms of economically because the organization does not need to hire a large number of members to check the personnel no to mention as well as saving the time. Thirdly, parents use baby monitoring for checking their baby in an indirect way and they feel more relaxed. Sine, parents are aware of the performance of these systems and they trust them. However, some believes that they are monitored by some digital devices unconsciously and their private life is in danger. In fact, applying these devices is are increasing day by day in every places and situation. In addition, these security devices will find their specific place and inseparable among the people little by little and will be indispensable . Also, people are getting used to it. As far as I know, there is no doubt, that all the security gadgets are monitoring people and they have influenced in people's daily tasks. However, all these devices provide a safety and convenience convenient life.

Children Computer Overuse, Maryam

2015-10-03T08:10:12+00:00

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Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Who could deny have denied the growing number of hours children spend spent working with on their computers? It seems laptops are becoming kids' kid's best friend. I assume like any other activity this one has its own cost and benefits. However, in this case the drawbacks far outweigh the rewards. To begin with, a child who spends several hours playing video games where that their characters mainly promote aggression and violence is more prone to become numb to bloodshed. An Insensitive child means an ego‐centric citizen who does not care about others and its it's surrounding. To put it simply, this kind of attitude might lead to a brutal society that does not bring contentment to anyone. Also, the more insensitive people become insensitive, the less the art will flourish and the less beauty and happiness would exist. Then, when a kid sits in front of the screen playing games or surfing on the net he is engaged in a virtual world without any interaction with people at his age. Thus, his interpersonal and communication skills do not blossom. In other words, he is his not well‐equipped for his future as friends and contacts are one of the most significant tools for one's wellbeing, success and happiness. In the end, I would like to mention that although, overusing the computer could spoil both a child's future and personality, it is not sensible to ban this usage. We live in an era where/when that the whole life depends on computers. Almost every aspect of our life is influenced by this technology: communications, methods of learning and studying, careers and whatever you can imagine, so it is . So, it is every child's right to be familiar with a computer and be able to work with it confidently as he will need it all his lifetime. In conclusion, parents not only should limit their youngster's time spent in front of the computers, but also should be in charge of the games they play and the way the use the internet. Moreover, It is good to encourage them to interact with their playmates more than their tablet. 335 words

Blue, Ali Alizadeh

2015-10-03T08:09:34+00:00

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Blue butterfly falls and flies Flower is blue It makes a man blue Man in blue now is a wo But who knows What is a wo There is blood There is blue In mad terminal velocity There is flow There is flow Adding a Wo There is a point upon the mountain peak, and there is a point on the valley floor, from in his point of view, these two points are so far away from each other eachother, but she can fall and fly in a few seconds between those two points, and he, as a man, totally separates into pieces if wanna fall and fly with her, because she, as a woman, climbs into mad terminal velocity, then falls and flies. she, as a woman, can do such a thing, he, as a man, wanna be with her in fall and fly, but how? He knows that, if he wanna fall and fly with her, without to separating separate into pieces, he should add to himself a thing, of course a thing which belongs to her and a thing that is a part of her as a woman . He, as a man, adds wo to himself. He, as a wo plus man, wo‐man, could see how he is absorbed in blood flows of blue flowers of her in mad terminal velocity.

Behaviour of Visitors, Morvarid

2015-10-03T08:09:04+00:00

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Tourism industry is a new phenomenon which governments are faced with and local people's behaviore towards to visitors is a new discussion that governments should answer. Some people believe that visitors to another countries should follow fallow local treats. They claim that local behavior is the same as rules which everyone should obey them and there is no difference between local people and visitors. This group believes that customs are not changeable and no one should try to change them. Indeed, they claim that if they permit to visitors to behave according to their own, their local customs may change during the years. Nevertheless, others, myself included, believe that visitors with a different culture can bring different customs to the countries and local people can learn new treatment treats from visitors. In addition, sociologists are inclined to believe that it is necessary to change local behavior during the years to have a modern society. They claim that tourists can help society to renovate their customs and treats.behavior. Also tourism is a new industry which can raise revenues for governments and people who live in tourists spots, so . So it is important that visitors enjoy from staying at their destination and proposed it to others. In fact, if they are forced to follow fallow local customs, it may cause dissatisfaction and it may be a negative advertising. To summarize, tourism is essential for developedment as well as developing countries and for countries which want to be developed, so . So, forcing force them to behave treat in the same way that the local people do, is not a good idea to attract them to visit any country..