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Ali Banaie, Punishment

2020-10-09T19:38:42+00:00

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? First of all, I need to express that I don’t agree with punishment as a vital solution to train the children in general. However, it can be considered as an acceptable approach to make them aware of the difference between right and wrong. How you treat a child to teach him/her whether or not something is right depends on the child's age. Recent research indicates that the main part of human personality is formed during the first two 5 years. As a result, punishing cannot be a good idea for an infant. Besides, an infant has no awareness about what is going on around him/her. Many of the psychological problems of human beings, such as lack of self-confidence or having great stress when being confronted with unwanted situations, may be the result of inappropriate punishments in childhood. In my opinion, positive behaviors such as rewarding or encouraging, when a good deed is done by a child, have a better impact on the mental and psychological performance of children. On the other hand, the promise of a present can be replaced by punishment, provided that they make up for the mistakes they made. Punishment can be considered as a last resort. However, the severity of the punishment should be commensurate with the children's behavior and should not be physical or impose too much stress on the child. To sum up, I don’t believe in punishment as an effective approach to teach children to distinguish right and wrong. Parents and teachers have to learn how to teach this distinction/right and wrong to children. Talking, playing, and rewarding along with proper punishments can apply to training/nurturing/educating children.

Darya Attighi, Balanced Diet

2020-10-09T19:38:26+00:00

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A balanced diet, or eating balanced meals, is the key to a healty life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ? Nowdays people care less about their health because they are busier. And sometimes they do not have enough time to make breakfast or lunch for themselves. And they are forced to eat out. Although I think with an organized schedule we can managed to cook for our ourselves and we have a balanced diet . at A glance at the society, we find out that the number of diseases like blood pressure, heart attack is increasing daily. The main reason of that is because of bad unhealthy eating habits , such as fast foods , and not getting enough exercise and do not have having enough time to care about their health. The government should find a solution for to this problem and give people time for doing exercise and give schoolchildrenpeople vitamins that they need monthly . However, people have a greater role in their health. Because at the end of the day they decide what kind of food to eat. They should set the

Farkhondeh, Work Quickly or Slowly

2020-10-09T19:38:11+00:00

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. In the modern world, because of the close competition between among companies, the communities are looking for the factors playing the most vital role in moving the group forward. One of the contentions in this area is whether to work calmly, or perform as quickly as possible and take risks. I, myself, incline toward the former and in the following paragraphs, I will support my reasons. First of all, the most important key in order to take over our rivals is to work precisely rather than in precipitation. When you work in a hurry, the quality of the task decreases at the expense of its quantity and which one guarantees your success? Of course, in the long term, the accuracy ensures the development of the company. Numerous psychological studies acclaim that when your reaction time in performing a high-demand cognitive task increases, the accuracy of your responses decreases and you sacrifice the exactness for quickness. Secondly, swiftness and hurry elevate the cortisol levels, which is well-known as the stress hormone. The high levels of cortisol in the body is conduce conducive to anxiety. Meanwhile, most of the cardiovascular diseases ensue from having the anxiety in the long run. As a result, to work fast not only negatively affects the quality, but also leads to physical and psychological problems, which indirectly influences the success. Last but not least, when you work calmly, you allow your mind to analyze, compare and make decisions more effectively. As a result, you can better overcome to the upcoming obstacles, cope with the difficulties and improve your problem-solving ability. Taking short breaks can replenish your energy. By contrast, however; the relentless work leads to more pressure and fatigue. To sum up, I do believe that quickness is not the most important element in success even in this era, but rather a factor, which causes the exhaustion. On the other hand, when you give yourself time, you can refresh yourself and reach quality high-qualified remarkable achievements.

Farzaneh, Technology

2020-10-09T19:37:52+00:00

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Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? Gone are the days when communication was merely face-to-face or through mails. The ubiquity of technology, which offers many alternatives to traditional means of communication, has profoundly influenced relationships. A phenomenon which in my opinion is completely positive. As 21th century has been accompanied by technologies, several aspects of people’s interactions has been altered. Firstly, people use their mobile devices instead of less convenient methods such as letters or telegrams to interact with one another. Take WhatsApp or Viber as an example of mobile phone applications that have provided people with long hours of video calls or voice calls cheaply. Compare the quality of people’s interactions in the past, when mobile phones have had not been invented yet and the only way to make calls was through ones stuck to the walls, with their present unlimited access to the wide ranges of communication devices. In addition to that, easy access to the internet as an epitome of recent technologies, brought about a virtual ground that people can meet each other in and establish friendships. For instance, using a dating application, Tinder, the youth can search for partners and find the best match among the suggestions, which are based on the member’s members’ personal information and the analysis analyses that have been conducted. Although sharing personal information in order to get into relationships with people could in some cases leads to cyberbullying or the possibility of telling lies to people is higher as they are not meeting in person, the pros of it must not be neglected. Conceive of a couple trying to maintain their relationship when one of them is studying abroad. They can have access to each other at anytime and anywhere regardless of the far distances. Rarely can one share his life with someone when his partner is unable to know about his routines and daily challenges. The availability and convenience brought about by the internet are exceptional and has have contributed to the higher quality of people’s relationships and consequently that of their lives. In conclusion, although using technology in relationships could have its own threats, and does not have the feel of real interactions, I contend the role it playsin making people in touch in a less difficult way is the invaluable effect of it on our lives which make it a great development.

Milad Banaei, To Teach How to be a Good Parent at School

2020-10-09T19:37:10+00:00

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Nowadays, there has been a vast increase in the fields that children should be trained and become prepared for them due to the complexity and the more requirements of the modern world. The are many arguments both for and against teaching young children the crucial skills of being good parents in their future life. This essay deals with arguments both for and against this matter. It is completely evident that the school period is one of the most impressive parts of everyone’s life and this is why every person spends about 12 years of his life in this period. This period plays an important role to in prepare preparing the youth for entering society and training them to become productive adults in their future life. It is notable that one of the challenging and demanding issues that almost everyone might be encountered with is getting married and having their own baby. However, although the children who are in primary or secondary school may not have any sense of becoming parents or even getting married one day, there are some essential skills that they need to be prepared for them from an early age. For instance, patience, responsibility, sense of cooperation, Commitment and loyalty to family and such other skills need to be developed during the school period in the person’s character. Opponents of this trend believe that children should spend their school period for improving their knowledge in science and more theoretical stuff issues and there will be more opportunities for them in the future for learning useful skills for becoming prosperous parents. To conclude, it seems that the school period is not only the time for studying and getting a good mark in theoretical lessons but also could be regarded as a golden chance for learning useful practical skills for becoming reliable parents in the future.

Negar, Learning About Foreign Country

2020-10-09T19:36:52+00:00

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to learn about a foreign country is to read newspapers and magazines from that country. The modern world has provided plentiful sources so that people from various cultures find the opportunity to have a better understanding from other parts of the world. While some believe that newspapers and magazines are the best sources to meet this purpose, I think that they cannot draw a complete image because they may be biased politically in favor of a dominant party, understanding cultural contexts needs more in-depth observations and it is necessary to have face to face communication to know a foreign country. First of all, media in general, and newspapers specifically, have always been tilted toward their favored political party. Even in the most liberal societies, with the free flow of information, the political orientation of newspapers can be surmised/it can be easily said that newspapers are playing in whose field. If one is willing to know a foreign country, knowing what is really happening in its deepest societal strata cannot be obtained by turning newspaper pages. Ruled by a dictatorship regiment, a country can suffer from severe censorship. In such situations, by suppressing all other opponents, there is generally one side speaking. Can anyone have the slightest understanding of what is happening in North Korea by reading their published newspapers? Therefore, other people may be easily ill-informed about the true face of that countries. Moreover, customs, norms and cultural features are truly representatives of a country’s identity. There is this culture in my country, named taarof,/pleasantries/ which is considered an act of politeness in order to promote equality in a hierarchical culture. By watching this act or even being the other side of this situation, one can have a fully understanding of this concept which is popular among Iranians. Neither the newspapers nor the magazines are able to describe the real concept of taarof. As a result, if one fails to understand these cultural structures, there would be more confusion instead of certainty. Finally, not only do individuals benefit from having their own experience in another culture, but also they can broaden their perspectives by engaging in a fruitful conversation, something that cannot be obtained through mere reading. Making holding dialogues with people from diverse backgrounds is a door to unknown worlds. Fascinated by the knowledge that is gained, many establish real friendships can also be established which bring even more comprehension of that society. When you have friends from another culture, the amount of first-hand experiences you may experience as a foreigner is limitless. The more a person goes deep into societal classes, the better he/she will merge into that culture. As a consequence, these people can spread awareness while making an excellent reputation. To sum up, I believe that only by reading newspapers, one cannot become knowledgeable of another country. I suggest that people look for other sources such as watching famous documentaries to deepen their perception. Because because in this way they become well- informed, have more certainty and can raise awareness.

Parisa Zolghadr, Crime Educated

2020-10-09T19:36:34+00:00

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Crime and murder are rooted in society. Some people are caught in different issues are due to various reasons. Studies show the most important factor is money. In modern societies, people that have an educational degree can earn money better and easier than other people. I think people can be educated for a brilliant life but how can it improve criminals’ life especial when they are in prison? The studies show people that become criminal are not educated and don’t have any job. They can’t work in any field. They want receive money with out any difficulty. But this issue is opposite low and social life. Some of these criminals are due to psychological problems such as self confidence. They can live in society as well as other people after being educated. But this requires money and plans first. I believe that government can pay this money and bail them out in the prison. Thefirst plan is when they are in the prison. This time is best time because they understand that they can’t rapidly do this job for a long time. The Government can teach them and help them to learn a skill. With education they can have a job and earn money and this subject results in increasing their self-confidence. They can use this work force to teach others especially new criminals. I think other than the government, people can help educate criminals. They can pay money for this plan. When criminals are educated, they can work in different jobs alone with other people. With education they act and behave towards/treat others better. to conclude, I believe that education can help people that are in prison. this issue needs money and is essential to learn them. The Government and other people can help them. Without an excellent plan and psychological education this challenge will remain forever.

Zakariaee, Fat

2020-10-09T19:36:20+00:00

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Mojtaba Zakariaee- C8 t4 In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? Nowadays, people are faced with obesity, diseases as well as an unfit body in some countries. It is necessary to find why this is happening, and as well as also presents some solutions for dealing with this problems. Unbalanced diet is the main reason for overweight and health issues among people. It has two main reasons which in turn renders people to obesity obese and with many diseases. For one, fast foods which have high amounts of energy have significant portion of the daily diet and people prefer eating them more than home-made foods. For another, although junk foods are very delicious, they are not healthy. That is why because those foods are not prepared with healthy ingredients and need to be fry fried with oil which faced. For example most of the family families whowhich eat French fries, Hotdogs as well as Pizzas are faced with overweight children over weight and some science scientists believe that one of the reasons behind outbreaks of cancers is this unhealthy food. Furthermore, sedentary jobs and modern life style are the main reason which decreased daily physical activities and lead them people to be fat and loss lose their fitness. For instances, most of the jobs are required sitting in a chairoffice and working from dawn to dusk while wethey do not have not enough activities, as well as children who prefer to play with video games instance instead of going out and playing with their peers in parks. Less daily activity has caused people to health problems and many diseases such as cardiovascular disease or lever liver problems. A possible solution in order to improve people’s health and fitness could be to motivate people for daily sports and physical activities. For instance, Jogging in the morning and evening, and taking regular activities are very useful for families. In addition raising public awareness regarding the disadvantages of junk food and benefit of a fit body are the other methods which are necessary to encourage people to change their food program and replace fast foods with home-cooking cooked food. In conclusion, sedentary jobs, modern life style and unbalanced diet have led to the decline in health and fitness and increased the weight of many people in some countries. However, those problems can be dealt with if people increase their daily activities and are informed regarding to drawbacks of fast food to change their daily food program.