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Alireza Davari, Students Working

2019-10-04T12:36:32+00:00

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Some students work while studying.this often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Generally speaking, there are various reasons which plenty of students have decided to do working and studying simultaneously.Although this consideration has a negative consequences, the number of students who tendency to do it is growing which may lead to poor quality of the study. Without a doubt, the most common cause is high cost of education which results in a lot of students have to do work because they are faced with heavy financial expenses.for one, some of the universities and educational institutions are receipt high tuitions so some families cannot afford it which results in students have to work to pay their educational fees. Another reason is that obligesd students to do work while studying is tofor learn to take responsibility. as well asAlso, in some countries especially third world countries students work because their families need the additional income to lessen their families load. There are a possible solutions in this case.for instance, governments have the significant role in educational system development by expansion of electronic publishing and developing online learning services as well as promoting people to use it as a useful way to studying.besides, the governments must has made disbursements for education from government funds to make education free. moreover, for make a sense of responsibility for students, families can send their children to establishments like a technical school for learning a special profession by the way by having a part time job even voluntary tasks which are unpaid work we can help them to reduce sense of pressure who they are feeling repeatedly. To summarize, i think that the economic pressure is primarily concerned to this issue who students have to do work which can be solved by decreasing the amount of financial expenses who students have to meet. I hired a 25-year-old man.

Amir G, Population

2019-10-04T12:36:07+00:00

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Some people today believe that the world's increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Other people believe that the world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world's economy and society. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. The growing rate of population has become the focus of heated debate amongst many in different parts of the world. While an overwhelming majority of members of society hold, this positive rate can result in catastrophic outcomes, others opine that it can bring about a variety of merits. When it comes to this notion, I maintain that though many consider current population growth an alarming rise, this can benefit both humans and society if we can manage it appropriately. During the last century, the population growth rate has experienced a constant increase across the world. This has made many people worry about the limited resources, food shortage, and the place to accommodate this astronomical number of people. They claim that our planet is unable to provide minerals such as potable water and food for this ever-growing number of people. In addition to this, since only a small portion of the earth is habitable, this can lead to the majority of people moving to certain parts of the world which in turn causes overpopulation and air pollution in habitual parts of the world. On the other hand, many a person reasons the more the number of people, the more prosperity and happiness. The advocates of this idea believe that more people will demand more commodities and services which in turn this can automatically improve global markets. In other words, more people demand more space to live, and this leads to more construction and consequently more jobs. The same story is true for agriculture and other industries, hence the importance of a large population. To cut a long story short, I hold the idea that the growth of the world's population can become a desperate plight if we fail to manage it. I maintain despite the variety of viewpoints in this regard, strike a balance besides global consensus can pave the way for managing this controversial issue.

Bayan Nadimi, Playing Video Games Effect on Children

2019-10-04T12:35:48+00:00

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Many doctors are concerned about the high use of computer games by children and young people. What mental and physical problems may arise from excessive use of these games? How could these problems be reduced? The appeal of ubiquitous video games is increasing among children today more and more which have has far-reaching consequences on their physical and mental abilities but there are some beneficial solutions that leads to decreasing the effects of these problems. Perhaps the major mentally problem is the negative effect on children’s development, particularly in aspects of violence, antisocial tendencies behavior and increased aggressive thoughts and feelings. Simulated violence like those in video games, can render become them immune to themdo it and more inclined to act violentlyating, and also too much playing video games makes kids addicted and they are unable to socialise with their peers which that causes them to be socially isolated. Video games also have effects on children’s health including obesity, and muscular disorders. These games encourage Sedentary lifestyle and youngsters are inclined to obesity and do will not be not keen on doing outdoor exercise. Also video games can cause vison issues because of excessive use of screens. One of the Possible solutions to prevent protect children from against video game addiction can be that parents should be involved in their children’s activities for example, they can encourage their kids to participate in some sports championships or competitive matches. Another solution to wean kids off video games that is parents must handle it before it becomes an addiction. parents can develop a list of activities and opportunities that can be achieved in the same amountof time spend spent gaming and encouraging them to spend less time on playing. To sum up, video games addiction affects children’s lifestyle that which leads to some mental and physical problems such as obesity, violence and socially isolatedisolation. These problems can be solved by parents by allocating more time to doing exercise with their kids and encourage encouraging them to spend less time on playing by rewards.

Elnaz Aghaie, Shopping

2019-10-04T12:35:30+00:00

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During the recent decades, the world is moving toward consumerism. In this arena, people do not have a choice but to become wooed by the constant advertisements on the media and comply with the latest fashion they are presented with on the social media. In my stance, this trend could be dreadfully disadvantageous for the young generation in that they would become shallow and inconsiderate of what really matters. Consumerism, one of today's most pressing issues, routes is rooted infrom the giant corporations' unsatisfiable thirst for profit. Therefore, people unknowingly become part of the game the world's financial leaders have planned for them. The fashion industry is therefore moving toward fast-fashion, the modern equivalent of fast-food for fashion, which leads people to comply with the constantly changing trends and buy more. The young generation being under peer pressure and feeling the urge to fit in and be popular, spends hours and hours going from one shopping mall to another. Admittedly, being fashionable and attractive, is an inseparable part of being young and is not all bad. However, it should not become the sole field of interest and the source of confidence and interpretation of one's self. Young people should be led to spend their leisure time more wisely learning new skills or developing their mental and physical state through sports and meditation. To sum it up, the young generation needs to be more sensitive as to how they spend their time during the prime of their lives, gaining as much knowledge and skills possible for their future years. To that end, social attempt is required to encourage the young toward more valuable activities rather than the shallow ones such as shopping.

Elnaz Shokrolahpour, Stress

2019-10-04T12:35:09+00:00

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In some societies stress is now regarded as a major problem and it is thought that people suffer from more stress than they did in the past. however, others feel that the amount of stress people have today is exaggerated. They say that previous generations were under more pressure, but the idea of suffering from stress did not exist. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. In recent years, stress is becoming a common issue in people’s lives which causes them so many problems. However, some people think that previous generations had more serious difficulties to deal with. On one hand, our ancestors experienced huge problems due to poor living conditions. For instance, food shortage and lack of hygiene and sanitation which not only did caused so many diseases, but also took so many lives. Moreover, they did not have helpful technologies and equipment that modern people have, so they had to do everything on their own and suffered a lot of difficulties. On the other hand, nowadays everybody in our society is trying to achieve high standards of living,. Therefore, there is a huge competition to get a high salary job. And besides, people should work for many hours in order to keep their jobs, so they have less time to relax and spend with their families which puts them in a stressful position. Furthermore, many people these days live in big and crowded cities with problems such as air pollution and traffic congestion which contributes to stress symptoms. To sum up, although past generations had so many tough times/hardships in their lives, they did not complain about it and they had accepted itthem. It is hard to say which generation had more stress., in my opinion, every generation have has their own difficulties and stress has been felt by all of them in different ways.

Iman, Celebriteis and Young People

2019-10-04T12:34:46+00:00

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Agree Disagree Celebrities are more important for young people than older ones. Living in the world indwelt by some famous characters, barely can you find a person who is not attracted to one of these worldwide projected figures. However, there is an irreconcilable gap in the rate of this attraction for different age sections, by which I mean young people are more prone to these people than their older counterparts, hence my agreement with the claim. First of all, going through a sensitive juncture of their life, young people are seeking some exterior resources to construct their own characters. In fact, they are trying to fill their Tabula Rasa, philosophically speaking. This term refers to a specific state of mind which/that is considered blank and clean for a child. Only when a person ages and experiences the world, will it be filled. Hit by an overwhelming amount of materials containing information about these interestingly captivating figures, youngsters are ready to gain information from these time-to-time displaying persons, albeit weak, and even go further to follow them as their role-models. Secondly, they want to be more involved with their respective societies which nowadays are adorned with fashion, so they will be more affected by celebrities which are always presented. Moreover, biologically, young people are struggling hard with mate attracting mechanism. Consequently, they search for the means and ways to do so. Erotically hot figures with shiny bodies are making some perfects examples to copy in the way of mating. Last but not least refers to a psychological need that is to be met; the sense of acceptation. These trusting eyes are demandingly looking for other eyes not only to be seen but also to enjoy the luxury of being accepted, especially by their peers' groups. In a nutshell, universally promoted, these faces and bodies are significantly followed by people in/of all ages, in particular juveniles, though elders have their own of course, like some political or intellectual ones which have turned into celebrities all around the world.

Moahmed, Deprived Children

2019-10-04T12:34:25+00:00

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Students from disadvantaged families and rural areas are finding it difficult to get a university education. Some people believe that universities should help them. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience. Getting accepted into universities and receive higher education is believed to be the first step to embark on a long, successful career which can in turn guarantee a happy life. This, however, for many from deprived homes and areas may not to be a choice, but I believe that with the aid of the government and public, socially-disadvantaged students can taste success as others. It seems, on the face of it, that financially supporting all poor children to go to universities can bring a huge burden on the government’s shoulder, but it can be of a great advantage. First, receiving higher education, one can have better job prospects and consequently have a well-paying job or establish a highly profitable business in the future which in the long term can benefit the community or government. In fact, since these children have been born and raised in areas which lack basic amenities, they have first-hand experience of what is required to be done. There are numerous cases of thriving people who, after becoming successful and probably wealthy, returned to their ancestral lands to help their people, setting up a business to alleviate the chronic unemployment suffering their or found hospitals or schools to make their hometowns more livable. Secondly, this is a long-term investment not only good but highly promising for the government. Many of the government schemes in the aforementioned areas are doomed to failure through lack of in-depth demographic and geographic knowledge. Moreover, individuals also can play a considerable role to help such children achieve their full potential. From humanitarian perspective, this it is our responsibility to give each other a hand in the long path of life to pursuing happiness. Some are born in with a silver spoon sliver in their mouth, Some, on the other hand, may are be deprived from of the right of having a close-knit family by the hand of destiny. Even so, we are all the same and we never should forget it. Furthermore, helping such children will indeed be of the public’s advantage as this leads to a better community for all. Being poorly-educated or even illiterate, and subsequently out of job, these children see no future for themselves. Rejected by their own society, these children they are probably prone to join street gangs causing problems for all abiding citizens who once turned a blind eye on to them. To conclude, although supporting socially deprived students to in entering universities can cost in short time on the government and individuals in society, I strongly believe the advantages seem so massive that we may ignore them rather than our own kinds.

Punishment

2019-10-04T12:34:05+00:00

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent… What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? Over the time, children nurturing has constantly been one of the most vitally psychological issues. Accordingly, hardly a day goes by without hearing about new books and articles publishing in relation to correct principles to children cultivating and how parents can punish their children. From my point of view, punishment, in an efficiently structured way, is an inevitable phenomenon to raise a child provided that it is not corporal punishment. To begin with, distinguishing right from wrong at an early age is crucial. In fact, not only does it affect an individual’s childhood, but also it can give rise to significant effects on their future, because a large proportion of individuals’ cognitive development and their personality have formed during this pivotal age. Moreover, since pupils are less mature to understand the concept of bad or good precisely, they can benefit from parental advices and tutorial guidance to being aware of the meaning of what they do. It can be inconceivably efficient. Tto the extent that pupils can easily imitate whatever they see, without any grasp of tasks’ content, for example imitation of verbal abuse or inappropriate words, hence the importance of parent’s and tutor’s aid. On the other hand, in this way, punishment is seemingly imperative. It should be said that punishment can lead to the proper distinction in that positive and negative image of a task permeates children’s mind. In addition, punishment which is taken into account should not be harmful for kids physically and mentally. Unfortunately, many an individual have suffered from the lasting effects of penalties during their childhood. Therefore, some punishments like avoiding from taking her to the playground, awarding chocolates and toys and playing video game can be accepted. Besides, parents and teachers should let children know about why they are impeded from these facilities. Taking everything into consideration, I personally opine that although punishment is an effective way which can help children to detect differentiation right from wrong, it should be constructive and trivial. It means only when punishment can work efficiently, does it just tempt children to gain morality properly.

Setareh Jalali, Advertising

2019-10-04T12:33:45+00:00

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?Advertising is influencing people more and more. ?Is this a positive or a negative trend? Give your own opinion and examples Nowadays, advertising is a well-known solution to guarantee the high turnovers for manufacturers. while the benefits accruing to the company’s revenue are conspicuous, it may cause inevitable negative effects on company’s reputation. I believe that the benefits of advertisements outweigh the drawbacks.(the focus should be on people NOT companies) Every new product of almost every companiescompany, even predominant companies, are being introduced by advertising. Make Making use of different methods of advertising, for instance using cartoon’s characters, famous celebrities or vivid colors and exaggerating the advantages grab children’s attention and brings about sharp rises in company’s outcome. Being susceptible to the effects of advertisements, children and young people are more liable to perform impulsive purchases while adults assess them without considering advertisements. Yet, if company dissatisfied dissatisfies its consumers and lures them by such methods, next time less fewer consumers take the risk to challenge new products, since they feel distrusted toward them and this adversely affects company’s reputation and revenue. However, one of the major features of advertising is paving the way for competition. Advertisings Advertisements deliberately set out to magnify the distinguishing features and represent products as more valuable in comparison to similar samples. Thanks to the competitive market, so various are the products that, not only can consumers gather a great deal of information through advertisements, but also it becomes a must for a company to develop their products, otherwise they will not be able tocannot keep up with market. In conclusion, I personally think although advertising might have misguided young people, it forces manufacturers to improve their products precisely. If they fail to do so, they will simply fade away from the market. Setare jalali

Shideh Pourjoola, Language Learning

2019-10-04T12:33:19+00:00

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Learning a foreign language includes a variety of advantages in developing knowledge, personal ability, understanding diversediverse sity cultures and lifestyles, finding new friends and …, so it cannot be limited only for certain reasons like traveling or working aspects which are more effective in communication skills. Both points of view are explained in this assayessay. On one hand, a growing number of people want to learn other languages to find a job, migrate or maybe because they are interested in traveling and visiting multiple communities to communicate and interact with foreign people. Therefore, they are obliged to improve their foreign language to meet their needs. For example in my country most of the people are studying English as an international language to enhance their knowledge particularly in professional field like education. In other word, people besides learning a foreign language, could get more benefit as well. They will be able to boost their creativity by thinking and solving the new phrases and expressions as well as improve their memory and attention span. Furthermore, bilingual people are more familiar with cultural and traditional aspects of other country by reading diversity books, so they could make friend easier especially through the social media networks. All these advantages would help them to build up their self-confident. In conclusion, learning other language especially those which are more common around the world not only facilitate communication process in visiting foreign people during travel or work in developed countries, but also can be effective more in scientific and psychological field.