Fridays https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/249-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-07-07 Fri, 03 May 2024 14:19:21 +0000 Joomla! - Open Source Content Management fa-ir info@ieltstoeflcenter.com (IELTSTOEFLCENTER) Alternative Medicin vs Conventional One, Vahid Tavazoei https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/249-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-07-07/1515-alternative-medicin-vs-conventional-one-vahid-tavazoei https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/249-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-07-07/1515-alternative-medicin-vs-conventional-one-vahid-tavazoei  

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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. These days many are willing to undergo alternative treatment rather than conventional ones. Yet there remains some disagreement as to whether such a trend should be considered optimistically or pessimistically. While there is certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that the drawbacks of this practice outweigh its advantages. First of all, it is an indisputable fact that there is not strong scientific evidence behind the alternative medicine field of science and for some cases of this medical method, they are virtually unheard of two decades ago, so the less experience based a science is, the less deeply addressed the field of knowledge is, hence, the lack of conviencing knowledge-based evidence about alternative medicine. A case in point is homeopathy which has become widespread, especially in western countries. Equally importantly, however, in terms of effectiveness of alternative medicine, what can be impressive is placebo effect and psychological issues. Hence/therefore, the sheer effect of this treatment is not as conspicuous as its conventional counterpart. Although usually having access to the minimum side effect, alternative medicine is more likely to be set for being effective in the long term and for chronic conditions than in short term. Acupuncture is a particularly good example in this regard. Admittedly there is an alternative therapies fever in some areas throughout the globe which can be in some cases a testament to the effectiveness of this kind of cure. Nonetheless in reality, dealing with serious medical problems, conventional medicine possesses the ability of being effective and efficient in saving individuals' life which can be highlighted in any surgeries and operations. In conclusion, each kind of therapyies has its own target which makes it difficult to compare the priority of each one and in some cases if people were provided with a mix of these two types of treatment, it would be more fruitful in terms of effectiveness and fewer side effects.

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Communications Technology, Amin https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/249-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-07-07/1514-communications-technology-amin https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/249-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-07-07/1514-communications-technology-amin  

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Mobile phones and the Internet have made it easier to stay in contact with other people. However, as a lot of time is spent using telephones and computers, there is less face to face contact and direct communication. Is the growing use of communications technology a positive or a negative development for society? Amin With the increasingly rapid development of Information Technology, today even children possess cell phones and itwhich accurately illustrates how ubiquitous these devices have becomeen. While there are valid arguments to the contrary, some experts still believe humans benefit from the gadgets including telephones, computers, and the Internet. This essay focuses on why the usefulness of such devices overshadows their drawbacks. First and foremost, given the fact that people give their full attention to their mobile phones everywhere, some part of the community suffers from the people surrounding them staring at their devices with little attention to their families. Indicating complaining people are continuously texting at the parties, psychologists are worried about this trend which in turn will certainly lead to the emergence of specific social illnesses, such as shyness. Although a number of scientists criticize excessive usage of communication technology in the contemporary life-style, its positive sides are indisputable, eithertoo. Proponents of the constructiveness of tele-communications state that society will enjoy using such utilities provided individual people utilize them properly. Regardless of their locations, branches of a firm can take advantage of radio contacts which in turn not only facilitate their project implementation but also lower their overheads. What is more, who denies that the Internet paves the way for researchers? Browsing the web through computers, scientists are able to accelerate the processes of their studies, as they raise their awareness of other researchers across the world. Moreover, a variety of businesses today apply social networks to advertise their products. In the past, the cost of every product reflected the expensive advertisement/advertising strategies companies used to attract/lure customers. In a nutshell, despite its negative points, the public has experienced numerous benefits it has acquired through the use of contacts across far locations. If people were thought taught at elementary schools how they should utilize communications technology, we would not be witness to the usage wrongly.

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Fixed Punishment, Mohadese https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/249-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-07-07/1513-fixed-punishment-mohadese https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/249-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-07-07/1513-fixed-punishment-mohadese  

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Although some people surmise that circumstances should be considered by lawmakers to define punishments, others believe that fixed punishments for each type of crime would be well-judged. First, these two opinions will be investigated through this essay and then my point of view will be outlined. A group of people opine that specific punishment should be examined by lawmakers for an individual crime. If this consideration was helpful, governments with strict laws would have no problem. While, countries such as Saudi Arabia with severe disciplines to bring people under their control have encountered many troubles. Fixed punishments not only did not reduce the crime rates in these countries, but also motivated people to protest against inappropriately made laws. On the other hand, others suppose that conditions/circumstances should be taken into account for penalty determination. For instance, when someone encounters a situation where they have which has to defend themselves himself/herself and that case ends up in to murder, this happening assumes as self-defense and death penalty is not fair for this person. These this group believes that a mentally ill person who commits a crime should be punished considering hishim/her illness. Moreover, Intolerable and poor conditions turn people into an offender. Provideding with a proper condition, these people could be useful for their community. In my estimation, these are some innocents innocent people who commit illegal action (without malice aforethought)/unintentionally. Although they are lawbreakers, they should be judged justly by considering all motivations and convincing factors that changed that person into a wrong doer. To conclude, judges should penalize offenders regarding persuasive terms and they should not decide based on prejudgment about the guilty of an offence. Flexibility and a sense of justice help them to establish punishments squarely.

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Internet, Elahe Ghasemi https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/249-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-07-07/1512-internet-elahe-ghasemi https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/249-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-07-07/1512-internet-elahe-ghasemi  

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According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities world- wide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction. How far do you agree with this opinion? In recent years, the usage of the internet has dramatically increased among people and especially the teenagers who spend a considerable amount of time on surfing the social network. Although some people believe that it has generally opened up new communication possibilities, however it negatively affects people's social livelife. Therefore, I tend to agree that the internet has a significant impact on individual social interaction. It is true that using the internet for long hours can cause a detrimental impact on either both emotional and physical health. For instance, it would damage both physical posture and brain cells meanwhile, leadings people to end up addicted which is testament to seclusion and alienation. Moreover, the social network addicts would have difficulties in forming face-time communications. They may have a fear (in) approaching with the people especially with those of a different gender. In contrast, the benefits of the visual world cannot be denied. Nowadays, people can contact to their families and friends more easily and cheaply over the long distance. Furthermore, many businesses these days depends on the internet since many conferences and meetings are held dispose via video calls. In conclusion, although the internet has massive advantages in different aspects, but I opine that its the usage of it should be eliminated. In addition, people should dedicate more time to visual interactions.

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Printed Materials or Online, Shirin https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/249-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-07-07/1511-printed-materials-or-online-shirin https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/249-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-07-07/1511-printed-materials-or-online-shirin  

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Do you agree or disagree with fallowing statement? It is better to use printed materials such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Studying and being a student are always associated with research,. a group of people believe printed materials can be more helpful than online materials and the another group on the contrary/quite the contrary. As far as I am concerned, the latter group and I are on the same page. To start with, online information is more up to date than that of the printed one. It does not mean you can rely on whatever you find on the internet, but both writing and the process of publishing a book take a long time and as we know, with the high speed of developing technology, it is not possible to update up to speed a printed book immediately. In addition, you can have the articles whenever you want. When I was a university student, I went to on a trip for holidays and I wanted to prepare my proposal. In that time, if I wanted to use books, I would have should to carry a lot of heavy books with me by myself to work on my project. But I prefered to use online articles and e-books for which I just needed a good internet connection to have them. Moreover, searching in a library to find the exactly of what you want not only did takes a lot of energy, but also time. Last but not least, produced with harmful environmental consequences, printed books are more expensive than online materials. So online materials could be used by a wide various range of people, and money will not be a limitation for education. To sum it up, I opine, as a comparison between searching online, or in printed books, the advantages of the online search carry more weight than those that of printed ones.

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Same Product Anywhere in The Word, Ali Sedaghat https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/249-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-07-07/1510-same-product-anywhere-in-the-word-ali-sedaghat https://www.sabaitc.com/index.php/workshop-speaking-writing/writing-workshop/2015-10-31-06-09-31/249-fridays-writing-workshop-1396/writing-workshop-friday-96-07-07/1510-same-product-anywhere-in-the-word-ali-sedaghat  

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world Do you think this is a positive or negative development? The rising trend of communication facilities and the internet has spawned many businesses, as a result domestic products are now global. we can see the same products in different markets this is a development which has brought us many new opportunities in the global village . In spite of the negative aspects, I agree with this trend. To begin with , many big brands are now in markets and people are not bound to domestic products; , they can purchase new technologies at their market. Moreover, they can be a part of this technology. for instance, a country which does not necessarily produce android and IOS mobiles, but can write applications for itthem, and sell them back to the original country or other places of the world. Second, many domestic traditional crafts are now abandoned in countries due to lack of customers. global distribution can result in higher quantities of sale , and scale of production .Not only does this distribution reinforce traditional culture but also can absorb investment .furthermore, when you see other countries' y's products in your market, it could set moods in you, and as a result lures tourists into visiting the original country, for example abthe original magnificent Persian carpet in other places of the world is considered as a symbol sample of IRAN encouraging visitors to come. in contrast, one negative aspect could be copy of original product by the targeted export country in low quality and damaging the spirit of it. another issue is when big brands break into market they make put a strong pressure on small domestic small companies. In conclusion, by considering the advantages it that this development brings, we have no other way to accept this modern phenomenona. we had better accept this trend and try to get along with it.

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