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Morteza Nemti Writing Task II #14 Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. The reason why people’s incomes unbelievably excessively differ from those that of others in amount is not always the level of responsibility they’ve assumed, nor even the value do that they have provided the community with. Sportsmen [set, make] are good examples, in this regard, whose eligibility of a considerably higher salary compared to the people’s average has always been called into question by its critics. Sometimes injured and almost always in danger endangered, all athletes form a pyramid in which the base consists mostly of many who forever lead an ordinary life whether in the case of success which theirs are entirely negligible or when regarding fame, something they may suffer the lack of. At the pick, are only a few, small in population, but widely famous and immensely rich although excessively hard working and most importantly tolerant in any regard called the professional. The average salary the whole pyramid receives in the relatively short career carrier of the consisting members must not be even comparable to that of well-paid-job holders, but with a different triangular-shape distribution whose base, this time, is allocated to those at the peak pick of the pyramid. Before complaining about their so-called high salary people must see the all days of hard work, hear the mighty screams of pain due to injury and suffer the pressure of media publicizing the simplest and smallest mistakes and attend the community not the private and safe one (which) they are used to but where no privacy is respected. Unfairness, here, is not the issue of how and why they earn much. Instead, the unjustness (that) there is, is in the talent and gifts different sportsmen have. Such an unjustness dates back to the days of slavery when many fought to the death to lead to only one’s survival and freedom. To those who may believe that the amount people earn must be in accordance with what they do, I may argue that no one seemingly can evaluate what people do for society. Bringing joy and entertainment to the fans of all generations by letting their dreams to come true, athletes play an irreplaceable role in making the world a better place to live in. Morteza Nemti Writing Task II #14 Followed from the above, since hardly would a widely-accepted method be able to evaluate the outcome of different professions, I believe that we should not disturb/disrupt/prevent a naturally-formed balance between jobs of different kinds and, sometimes, not clear reasons for which their holders deserve an extravagant salary life, a balance which, I must admit, to many is highly vulnerable and temporary since it is unfair.

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